Book: Brooklyn Starr

Author: itsevax

Genre: Romance and teen fiction

COVER

So i'm starting with the cover, although the cover was good, i feel like the title wasn't eye catching as it was the same color as the background. So maybe you can change it to white or something.

BLURB

The blurb is the thing than hooks your reader and makes them want to adventure into your story and give it a read. Your blurb was good, but I think you could do better and use a better range words to improve it. And I noticed some very small mistakes, that you could correct:

Original: school behind.She meets new people and even grows

Edited: school behind. She meets new people and even grows

CHARACTERS

I really liked the diversity and the beautiful characters, you had placed in your cast. 

CHAPTER 1

I think the main problem was the paragraphs were too long, there was no gaps, fix that mistake and your good to go.... also i found some typos:

Original: Hey,I'm Brooklyn

Edited: Hey, I'm Brooklyn

One more thing avoid using words like 'kinda' or 'gonna', it sounds more unprofessional. 

OVERALL

Overall, this piece was good, and you applied and did a good effort into this. Good luck with your future works <33