Title: Blood Skull

Author: lumireii

Genre: fanfiction

COVER

I had to start with the cover because it was well... stunning! Personally, a good cover is what lures me in. You just need something eye-catching that relates to the book and you just had that! I really loved how the title and the cover of your story matched, the women behind the skull... amazing!

BLOOD SKULL

I seriously loved those first lines that I found at the beginning of the book... "𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐩𝐢𝐞𝐫𝐜𝐞𝐝 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐬, 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐛𝐫𝐨𝐤𝐞 𝐧𝐞𝐜𝐤𝐬 " this hooked me in so bad I dived straight into the book! The gifs and the new faces that you places into your book were breathtaking. I also loved the playlist that you placed for your book.

ZERO | PROLOGUE

I seriously fell in love with the quote at the top. It grabbed my attention. You began the story with a striking first paragraph which keeps the readers interested to find out what happens next, and had a similar effect on me. 

I also loved how you write in long paragraphs and then set a small sentence between them, giving the writing wonderful effect.

ONE | CHAPTER 1

 So... I clicked on the first chapter and I was greeted with breathtaking language... those crimson lips had me going like... maaaaan! {excuse my informal language :)} The rest of the chapter had me on my toes, the amazing language and words had me hooked.

LANGUAGE

The language used was extremely mature. There was a extremely wide range of vocabulary used, which I loved to see. The vivid descriptions really made me feel present in the scenes, which is amazing quality for the book. I tried my best and read the chapter more than once, to find any mistakes or typos... but alas i couldn't... the editing is amazing!

OTHER

You should be extremely proud of yourself for writing such a stunning piece! You even wrote that you saw the hunger games for the first time and headed over to Wattpad to write a story, well it was an stunning piece for a first try. Normally I don't red fan fictions but your book was remarkably incredibly and it encourage me to give a couple other hunger games fan fictions a try!! Also where can I watch the hunger game movie???

OVERALL

Overall, this was an enjoyable read. Also your story will go in my reading list as a platinum story.  Good luck with your future works <33