Book: Viper Croanah

Author: Cecilia_Faith

Genre: Paranormal, Teen Fiction

COVER

So I'm going to start off with the cover. To say the least it wasn't attractive at all. To be honest I didn't even want to take a peek at the books content because the cover didn't appeal to me one bit. Wattpad is all about attractive and eye catching covers, and if you want to success it that area you need a good cover. If you want an amazing cover you can check out my cover book, and request it there.

TITLE

The title was a bit boring. An amazing Wattpad book title needs a quick and snappy. The first bit of the title was good, but maybe try and change the next part (change the surname, it just sound weird.)

CHARACTERS

The main character was interesting but bratty at the same time.

GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION

Looking through the chapters, the mistake I found was that you used the word 'I' a bit too much. I would recommend looking into that and trying to find other ways to fix that mistake. 

One more thing i would like to point out is that there were no paragraphs, it was all muddled up into an enormously large one and half way through it made me lose interest. You could probably go back ad add space gaps.  

OVERALL

I recommend fixing these changes and you're go to go. Good luck with your future works :)