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Hi guys, I am seriously sorry for not updating a review for a week, I got caught up with school and then my mum ended in hospital so I wasn't able to review a book, but now i'll be pushing a couple of reviews out!


Book: The Last Philosopher

Author: NickfEast

Genre: Fantasy, Comedy


COVER

So I'm going to start with the cover. To be honest I think it could be a bit better. It wasn't that attractive or eye catching, it was kind of bland. Remember that Wattpad is all about, eye catching covers. You can find many graphic books out there, where they make free Wattpad covers. If you are looking for some books you can check out my cover shop or head to my reading list to find a graphic book.

BLURB

I personally think the blurb was amazing. You had the rights amount of questions that keep the readers hooked and entertained. 

CHAPTER 1

The first chapter is just hilarious, the funny joke "Dick" short for Richard actually got me laughing the moment i saw it! I loved your descriptions and the way you set out your sentences, it gave the whole 'other universe' vibe. The way the character talked to him self and gave question made it even more funny.

GRAMMAR

The grammar in her was fantastic, great job! I couldn't find ant mistakes or grammar corrections,  but one thing I suggest is to write the 'updated' part and the date at the bottom rather than the top. 

OVERALL

Overall, it was great. I did only review the first 10 chapters because i had many reviews to do, but those 10 chapters had me hooked!!!

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