a new offer
I hope you all enjoy my first chapter.
I got six reviews from my last chapter, which I'm very grateful for, and I did get some people pointing out some of my grammar and spelling I need to work on. I completely understand, and thank you all for being nice about it, and thank you all for liking my first fan-fiction.
Now anyway, I hope you all like the next chapter here.
Chapter two a new offer
the great kyuubi kitsune was carrying naruto's unconscious body on his back as he ran out of the land of rivers, He was heading to an abandoned lands that has been long forgotten.
He had to pass through a few other nations to get there, luckily for him he didn't get spotted by any shinobi
he soon reaches the ocean, The last thing he needed to do was to swim to the abandoned land.
It took him a few hours but after that, he had finally made it, When he got there he was on a beach, after passing the beach he soon saw a big long field of green uncut grass, There were some hills and There were even some overgrown forests.
He was looking for somewhere to rest after a long journey he had, soon he found a cave that was big enough for him on top of the hills.
This place was going to be his new home now his new den, When he got in he carefully placed Naruto down on the ground.
"Sleep well kid, you are going to need it," Kyuubi said quietly as he went to rest next to him.
2 weeks later
Naruto has been unconscious for over two weeks now, he started to wake up, but his body still feels a little pain and stiff from what he did to the Akatsuki members.
at first, everything was blurry to him but soon his vision returned and he seen he was in a dark cave but it was also warm.
"Am im dead? is this hell or purgatory or limbo?'' Naruto asked himself as he did believe he was indeed dead but did not know where he was now.
Suddenly he heard a familiar voice behind him, "Nope, you're still alive, kid."
that voice sounded like an echo to his ear, Naruto turned his head around and gasped to see the Kyuubi voice telling him he is still alive.
"What's going on? Why am I still alive? I thought I was going to die after eating that cursed fruit you gave me!?" Naruto said calmly but he still was exhausted.
"Kid, I'm even more surprised you are alive as well, You have tails like mine," Kyuubi said as he was trying to see if Naruto knew or not that he has nine tails and fox ears.
Naruto sat up and looked at him, confused, "What are you talking about? I don't have...'' Naruto stopped talking when he looked down at his feet and saw that there were nine long yellow tails, Naruto was starting to freak out, he was about to scream and immediately put both of his hands on the sides of his head and felt something long and furry, He realized his ears got longer, "wh...WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!?" Naruto screams out.
"KID! CALM DOWN AND SHUT UP SO I CAN EXPLAIN EVERYTHING TO YOU!" Kyuubi yelled at him, trying to get him to calm down.
Naruto still can't get over the fact that he still has fox ears and nine tails on his body, "WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!? TELL ME NOW!" Naruto screams even louder than before.
"KID! IF YOU DO NOT CALM DOWN, I WILL KNOCK YOU OUT! SO CALM DOWN NOW!" Kyuubi yelled at him again.
Naruto took a deep breath, trying to relax, "OK... OK... Ok... ok... Fine, what is it you want to tell me?" Naruto asks while trying to get himself to calm down and get up.
Kyuubi explained everything to him up to where he brought him to his new home, "Anyway, kid, you were out for two weeks before you decided to scream in my ears about your new fox tails and ears."
"Ok, OK, I'm sorry," Naruto said.
"now then- wait, did you just say sorry to me?" Kyuubi looked confused at him for a moment.
"Yes, I did not know you have such strong hearing," Naruto said to him.
"Well, kid, I just didn't expect that from a human to say something to me like that... well then again half human," Kyuubi said.
"Ok, now that's over, what about you telling me how do I even have fox ears and tails from eating that tail beast fruit and why did you call me half human?" Naruto ask him as he did still have questions he wanted answered.
"ok, now let's get started with the matter of discussion of your new bloodlines then," Kyuubi started but quickly got interrupted by Naruto.
"New bloodline?" Naruto asks, confused.
"Well, since you're low on hearing kid, I'm just going to yell it out then," Kyuubi started before yelling out explaining the story.
"WELL! KID SINCE YOU SOMEHOW SURVIVED EATING MY TAIL BEAST FRUIT I WILL TELL YOU! BUT I THINK YOU NEED TO KNOW FIRST HOW ALL TAIL BEAST DEMONS CAME TO BE! ONE THOUSAND YEARS AGO! A MAN KNOWN AS THE SAGE OF SIX PATHS! HE BEGAN THE SHINOBI WORLD BY GIVING CHAKRA TO MANY HUMANS AND TAUGHT THEM HOW TO USE IT! HOWEVER, THE SAGE OF SIX PATHS GOT ALL THE CHAKRA FROM THE MOST POWERFUL DEMON KNOWN AS THE DIVINE TREE IT TURNED INTO THE JUUBI DEMON OR BETTER KNOWN AS THE TEN TAIL DEMON! HE WAS ABLE TO SEAL IT INTO HIMSELF, MAKING HIM THE FIRST JINCHUURIKI OF THE JUUBI AND SOO..." kyuubi was trying finally to finish the story but was interrupted by naruto.
"ok, but what does all of that has to do with me? WHERE WE ARE NOW!? WHEN ARE WE GOING TO GET TO THE PART WHERE YOU CAME FROM AND MY NEW BLOODLINE YOU MENTIONED!?" Naruto yells out as he was also pissed off by him yelling out his story.
"KID SHUT THE HELL UP! I WAS JUST GETTING INTO ALL OF THAT! NOW, WILL YOU LET ME FINISH THE STORY!" Kyuubi yells.
"Ok fine, but you don't have to keep yelling out your story in my ears, and you have been yelling since I woke up," Naruto told him.
"KID! I TALK THE HELL OUT LOUD! WHAT DO YOU EXPECT FROM ME BRAT!" Kyuubi yells at naruto.
"Alright, fine, I get it," Naruto said as he let him get back to telling his story.
"to make sure the juubi would never come back the sage of six paths use the creation of all things technique to Split the juubi chakra into nine different versions of the nine tail beast demons, and one of them was me, the nine tail fox as well know as the king of all foxes, the other eight tailed beasts are my brothers and sisters,"
"the sage of six paths or by his real name hagoromo otsutsuki, the one who gives us life and taught us many things like the tail beast bomb jutsu, and told us stories about his life and teach us all our one special jutsu that we all have,"
"even though we are not the juubi no more we are still apart of the Divine tree roots so we can still make its fruit, we all can create a tail beast fruit that can be given to humans, it will turn them into the most powerful and dangerous warriors that can kill anything in sight, but the chakra in their bodies will become too much for them to handle and it will kill them within a few moments, but hagoromo had told us, if a human was to survive eating one, they would become half human and half tail beast demon, so do you understand of all of this kid?" Kyuubi explains and asks.
"Yes, I think I do, but what about my new bloodline you keep talking about?" Naruto asks again.
"now that you are a tail beast hybrid, what that old man had told to me the first thing is you have to unlock your new kekkei Genkai and have yin and yang abilities, and can use the tail beast bomb jutsu as the rest of us tail beast can do, a new look is the new ears and tails, finally, if you have kids, they might have created their own kekkei Genkai or might get one that already exists," Kyuubi explains.
"Well, this is a lot to take in, I must admit I did not expect all of this?" Naruto said as it really was a lot to take in but everything he was saying could it be true! Maybe it could just be a lie but why though Naruto was wondering in his mind.
"Yes, now that it's over do you have any questions?" Kyuubi asks as he sees Naruto looking a little nervous.
"Well, I didn't know why you would be even telling me all of this? And I don't know why you would bring me here? I'm just curious about that part?" Naruto asks while looking at him.
"Look kid, you survived something that should have killed you, I mean it kid, you have become very interesting to me," Kyuubi said as Naruto was surprised by that.
I am just shocked that he had just said that about me!?' Naruto thought.
"Not in the millenia I have to lived through, even when I lost the old man who created me and the others, I have never seen a human survive and become a tail beast hybrid, I brought you here to offer you training," Kyuubi had finished as he just gave him an offer.
"I don't know about this,'' Naruto said as he was nervous about this offer even the kyuubi could see it.
"kid I know literally everything about you, I have seen through your eyes, I know what you think and do, I know what your questions are, you want to know who your parents are, and why did the fourth Hokage make you my jinchuuriki when you were just a newborn? that when this all started," Kyuubi said as Naruto was finally able to stand on his two feet again but was having problems balancing with his new tails.
He looked up and said, "How do I know you're not lying to me about this?" He did wonder if he is telling the truth about what he just said.
"kid Questions and more Questions after I thought it was just two? look kid, I might be a demon but I'm not a demon that tells lies and tries to get into your head, I'm just giving you an offer if you want to become a great shinobi warrior and make a name for yourself then accept my offer and if not then go and see what you can be without my help, there is a lot I can teach you kid, but if you don't want this offer of mine then, you will never find out many things that I can teach you and help you see things that you have never seen before," Kyuubi explained.
Before Naruto could say anything, the Kyuubi had one more thing left to say...
"by the way kid, if you want proof that I'm not lying about seeing through your eyes, I can say a few things that happened in your life that you don't like to remember, like those cursive village you live in, first most of the villagers hated you because they believe you were me since I was sealed away inside of you,"
"when you very young well younger at the age of three the ichiraku ramen gave you free bowls of ramen because no other food store would let you in,"
"Iruka sensei at first he didn't like you but he soon grew to care about you even going so far as almost dying to protect you when you were tricked by Mizuki to steal the forbidden scroll of seals,"
"then Kakashi sensei, Sasuke Uchiha, Sakura Haruno, and you were on all on team seven you three did a bell test to see if was you all were ready to be ninjas,"
"After doing so many D rank missions you went to the land of waves and after a few months of helping others doing other little missions as well during the chunin exams was the third Hokage death from Orochimaru hands,"
"and after the mission to bring back the old hag name Tsunade she sent you on a mission but because of your failure to bring back the last Uchiha to the village got you banished from the land of fire, should I go on like back then when all the kids in the Academy calling you a dead last, believe me, there's a lot I can keep telling you," Kyuubi finally finished what he was saying.
Naruto's eyes widened in shock, he knew there was no way he could have known all about that, but this got him to think about this offer now, realizing back with Akatsuki the Kyuubi knew about them trying to rip him out of his body even knowing about what the villagers did to him now.
'What can this overgrown fox teach me that I don't know without his help?' Naruto thought.
Naruto can see that Kyuubi was waiting for an answer.
"Well, kid, what is it going to be?" Kyuubi asked.
Naruto looked down and thought about this offer for a few moments and looked back at him and said to him, "I don't really know this is a lot for me to take in, I need a little more time to think about this, everything you're saying and everything I know, can I have a little bit of time to think about this first?"
"Very well, kid, I can wait for your answer, but right now, I'm going to sleep, come back and tell me what your answer is in the morning," The last thing Kyuubi said before going to lay down to rest for now.
Naruto saw a way out of the cave, and his eyes widened to see a big long field of green grass as far as the eye could see.
'Where am I?' naruto thought as he knew the kyuubi had brought him here but didn't give him the location of where exactly this place was in the world.
Naruto sat down and watched a beautiful sunset. He was more relaxed after everything,this place was actually peaceful to him.
Naruto layed down on the grass, closed his eyes, and started to think about the Kyuubi offer.
'Should I or not?' Naruto thought about this offer.
Naruto started to remember back to the time when kids made fun of him for being a dead last.
"Why do you think you can be a ninja? you're worthless and a weak loser."
"Hahaha, try it, loser. You can't beat any of us."
"You know I bet your family left you just because they knew you were nothing but worthless to them, and that's all you will ever be a loser, so get lost!"
"JUST SHUT UP," Naruto yells out.
Every kid was laughing at him.
'Why do I remember these times,' Naruto thought.
Naruto just started to remember why he was banished.
"Naruto, you are hereby banished from the land of fire for failing to bring our beloved last uchina back to our village, I don't know why we let you be a ninja, even to think you could be Hokage? You're nothing and worthless to this village now go and never come back you pest!''
Everyone shunned him in the village, Naruto kept hearing the same stuff, what they said about him over and over and louder and louder. DEMON FREAK, LOSER, MONSTER, WEAK, WORTHLESS! FOX! and finally hearing to himself... YOUR NOTHING he just collapsed onto the ground and started to scream so loud he woke up and realized he must have fallen asleep and saw the sun was rising.
"You have got to be kidding me... another nightmare again about my horrible life in that village,'' Naruto said to himself as he dropped his head back to the ground.
Dream or not what he was remembering, and he thought of things in the past of all the pain he went through and now realized this offer might be his only chance for him to become strong as well making a real name for himself in this world.
'I can't believe I'm going to do this,' Naruto thought as he got up and said to himself, "Well, better do this now than never."
Naruto walked back into the cave to find Kyuubi was just waking up, he saw naruto coming up to him
Naruto was only a few feet away from the Kyuubi, "So, kid, have you made your decision yet?"
"Yes," Naruto said as he was ready to tell him.
"Well, kid, what's it going to be?" Kyuubi asked wanting to know if he was going to say yes or no.
"My answer is yes, I want this offer, I want to see what you can teach me," naruto said while looking Kyuubi in his eyes as he was serious about this decision he just made.
"Kid, I'm very pleased that you have accepted my offer," Kyuubi said with a small grin on his face, knowing now he had a new apprentice now.
Naruto, on the other hand, was getting really annoyed with the kyuubi keep calling him kid, "look I don't like to be rude but can you stop calling me kid and just call me by my name you know it's Naruto."
Kyuubi rolled his eyes and looked back at him and said, "well then fine naruto, if you agree to stop calling me Kyuubi and call me by my real name Kurama from now on can we agree on that?" Kurama asked as Naruto was surprised that he had an actual name that wasn't Kyuubi but then again Kyuubi sounded like more of a title for him not a real name.
"Very well, sensei Kurama. When do we start training then?" Naruto said, trying to sound smart.
"Soon," Kurama said.
For some reason, Naruto is starting to get excited about his new life in the back of his head.
For the next three years, this world eventually knows the name the golden fox demon.
to be continued.
I hope you all enjoyed chapter two. I was struggling with this chapter. There were a lot of ideas swirling in my head.
In some other fanfic, I see Kyuubi just quickly taking pity on him so fast but what if naruto did something to get him curious and wanted to see what he can do?
the tail beast fruit I got from when Kaguya ate the chakra fruit.
Ps, I just started deviant art. That shows the golden fox demon fanfiction name to find my artwork on. My username on the site is hgbbhin him.
Thanks again for reading, check it out and see you back for chapter 3 coming soon by Justin game 44
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