You know what, I will give this story a second chance. I'm not too happy about this because this story ruined my pride. I'm staking my pride yet here again. Some people have actually voted for this. So I guess this story will be back up again. But I swear, this story makes my pride go down, I'm cancelling it, possibly deleting it. Like I said, I'm not too happy to put my pride on the line. This is the story's final chance unless my four favorite authors love it.