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A light dusty-brown she-cat with Amber eyes

Personality: a chatty she cat who can get along with everyone. She values everyone's opinions even if they're absurd. Sometimes she's like a ThunderClan cat, loyally sticking by any cats side. Other times she keeps her distance, knowingly. If she snaps at someone it's usually to defend another clan member. If she snaps at anyone otherwise it's because there a jerk and she doesn't like mean cats as much as nice cats. She will give them a piece of her mind, but knows to value their opinions anyways.

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Have you ever tried using that first part as an ending? I think you should give it a shot sometime before this or after this just because you never know what will be an excellent ending.