I don't really like him as leader, I would've preferred Graystripe to be leader instead of him. He was just fine as a warrior but once he became deputy he treated everyone like kits, especially Squirrelflight. Why did Leafpool have to have that stupid vision of brambles surrounding the camp. Ugh, he was so much better as a warrior. My friend agrees with me, he was better as a warrior. He was always like oh I'm not trusted because my father was Tigerstar. He became even worse when he started training with Tigerstar and then having to be a huge hero and killing Hawkfrost. He was so mean to Squirrelflight. He's like I hate you, no wait I love you, no I hate you, wait I love you. It's so annoying!!!!!! Ugh!

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