A/N: Hi everyone! This is my attempt of rewriting a DBZ movie- Broly The Legendary Super Saiyan! Leave a comment and let me know how I did for this first chapter lol

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Broly The Legendary Super Saiyan

Chapter 1: A Picnic Sounds Nice!

"Gohan, Gohan, wake up already!" I shook the demi-saiyan till he opened an eye.

"Five more minutes..." He yawned. He then turned his back towards me.

"Na-Uh, not today you couch potato! Bulma invited us to her picnic and we're going! Besides, what are you planning to do the entire day? Study?"

Gohan's hair was even more messed up than it usually was. There was only about an hour left before Bulma and the others would leave to a beautiful spot in a park.

"I'm so tired, I need more sl-" Gohan then closed his eyes and began to snore lightly. I sighed and went downstairs to the kitchen, grabbed a bucket, filled it with ice cold water then went back upstairs to Gohan's room.

"I'm sorry it had to come to this my dear friend, but you left me... with no choice, HYAH!" I then unleashed the cold water of death on the older boy.

Immediately, he awoken with a high pitched scream. I fell over as he tried to get the water out of his hair that had became drenched. "Why did you do that for Tania?!"

"Because someone didn't want to wake himself up and get ready for a picnic!" I scolded after picking myself off the floor. "Besides, if I would've known you would scream like such a little girl, I would most likely not have done that."

Gohan's face then began to turn a little red. I chuckled and got his favorite purple gi from his drawer and tossed it to him. "Get ready, we only have a short amount of time before Bulma picks us up."

"Sometimes you act just like my mother..." Gohan claimed while looking at me with a soft look.

"You think so?"

The boy nodded. I smiled and closed the door behind me. Do I really act like ChiChi sometimes? Maybe... Oh, i'm pretty sure her and Goku should be already awake by now at this time. I'll see what they're up to.

As I walked down the hallway, I heard voices coming from Gohan's parents room. I couldn't make out what they were saying until I was by their room. The door was opened and I observed as ChiChi was fixing her husband's tie.

"Goku, you have got to learn how to do this." She sighed as she adjusted Goku's light purple tie.

"I'm sorry ChiChi, i'm just not very good at this thing." Goku replied, scratching the back of his head.

"Knock, knock..." I say, catching the two adults attention. "May I come in?"

"Of course." ChiChi replies with a smile.

I noticed how well dressed ChiChi and Goku were. "What's up with the fancy clothes, you going to a 5 star restaurant or something?"

ChiChi laughed. "Oh no darling; Goku and I are going to get interviewed."

"Is it for a new job?!" I asked excitedly, hoping that finally we were soon gonna have a whole mountain full of delicious food to eat.

"Its too see if you and Gohan will get accepted to this private school I want you two to go to. You two are about to turn fifteen soon so that means you'll be entering the ninth grade this fall."

I sweat dropped. "You're kidding..."

"I'm very serious Tania! You and Gohan will be going to this school."

ChiChi got done fixing Goku's tie and gave him a glare. "Goku, you better NOT mess this up for these kids! Lets practice right now; So Goku, what are your hobbies?"

Goku looked bewildered. After a few seconds he came up with an answer. "To fight strong enemies and eat delicious sweets of course!"

ChiChi shook her head in disappointment. "No Goku, you can't say that..." The woman then put some more thought to a great answer. "I got it! Say you like reading and playing sports."

As if on cue, Goku and I fell over.

"Was it something I said?" ChiChi wondered.

"Nothing... its just..." I begin to speak after getting back on my two feet. "I don't really think reading would be a very good answer for Goku."

"Ya ChiChi, I don't read. I don't even know one books title." Goku confesses as he too got back up with a nervous expression. ChiChi brought a hand to her face. "This is going to be impossible..." She whined.

"I guess i'll see you two later, Gohan and I are going to a picnic with Bulma and the others. They should be here soon." I reminded ChiChi.

"Did you and Gohan finish your homework from last night, Tania?"

I nodded. ChiChi then took a closer look at me. "You're going to a picnic, not a martial arts tournament."

"Ya, I know." I laughed while looking at my dark pink gi with a light gray shirt as an undershirt. "We never know what's going to happen these days. Always seems like new enemies show up all the time. I gotta be prepared, you know?"

Goku smiled warmly. "That's right Tania, you do that! I guess me, Gohan and the others habits are rubbing off on you, huh?"

"I guess it is." I agreed.

"If only I could be in my favorite outfit again..." Goku sighed sadly.

"Stop complaining Goku!" ChiChi scolded her husband. "This interview is very important!"

"I really need to be going now. Good luck with the interview you two!"

Before either of them could say a word, I quickly hurried outside where I saw that Gohan, Bulma, along with her baby, Trunks and Krillin were all waiting for me.

"Took you long enough." Krillin remarked, looking a bit annoyed.

I blushed a little in embarrassment. "I didn't realize I took so long; I was having a small chat with Gohan's parents. Looks like they're not coming with us..."

"Don't worry, ChiChi already told us all about it." Bulma claimed. She then took out a capsule and threw it. A very nice looking red race car came into sight. "Hop in you guys, were gonna give this baby a run for its money!"

"Wait! Where's Vegeta? Isn't he coming with us?!" Gohan asked the blue-haired genius.

"Yes he is, he just thought it was a waste of time to take a car to the park like a normal person. Instead, he chose to fly!" Bulma answered angry.

I don't blame him; It would be less time consuming if we just flew instead...

"Sometimes, he can be a real jerk! That's why he's carrying all the food and supplies since he wants to be like that!" Bulma yells. I sighed. Why did you have to ask her that, Gohan? Now she's gonna tell all her problems that she has with Vegeta to us three the entire car ride...

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"I'm stuffed!" Gohan rubbed his filled, satisfied stomach. After all the food was gone, there was more than 100-200 plates stacked high.

Gohan, Vegeta, and I were the ones who ate the most. Roshi was drunk and began to dance weird, but pretty good while balancing plates on a stick while he held the stick with his teeth.

"You gotta teach me how to do that!" Gohan commented. I began to laugh.

"What's so funny?" Gohan asked out of curiosity. "It's just that, I can't imagine you getting really drunk like that. Its out of character." I managed to spill out while giggling.

"Don't listen to her, Gohan. You can get drunk whenever you want." Oolong tells him. I went to the pig and gave him a hard punch to the head. "Ow!"

"You don't tell him that you pig!" I scolded Oolong as a huge bump began to form on his head.

"Testing. Is this mic on?" Krillin asks through its speaker thing before singing. "AHEM! Okay, its on.... OHHH, I JUST WANNA BE YOURRR PUPPYYYY!"

All eyes went on him as he sung his umm... puppy song.

"Can anyone possibly think this is good?" Trunks wondered. I chuckled. "Well atleast he's trying his best to entertain us. Its not all that bad."

"You got that right." Gohan agreed as he continued to watch his friend perform on a wooden box.

Master Roshi even cheered Krillin on.

"AND THEN SOMEDAYYY, I'LL FETCH YOUR PAPER FOR YOUUU!" Krillin then began to sing before a gigantic spaceship landed near us.

"What's that?" I questioned.

"I don't know, looks like a type of spaceship. Lets check it out." Gohan suggested. I nodded, and Gohan, Trunks, Bulma, Master Roshi, Oolong and I went to take a closer look, leaving Krillin behind.

The door to the ship opened and hundreds of soldiers came out and kneeled down to Vegeta. "Sire!"

"What's the meaning of this?!" Vegeta questioned as he stood up. A tall man with black spiky hair, wearing saiyan armor along with a white cape came walking down the aisle of aliens. When he came closer, I noticed there was a scar running down one of his eyes and that he had a mustache.

All I heard next was how that tall guy had finally found Vegeta. I guess he was searching for him for some reason. Everyone continued to watch at what was taking place.

It turned out that this mysterious man's name was Paragus and he too was a saiyan.

"Gohan, do you believe that he's really a saiyan?" I wanted to know.

"I think he is Tania but I-"

Paragus's eyes then widened after he overheard Gohan say my name. He then got up very fast and went over to me with very hopeful eyes. "Your name can't possibly be Tania?! That's just unbelievable!"

I was bewildered. Why is it hard to believe that?

"Tania's her name! Why do you care?!" Trunks asks suspicious of the man. I sighed. You made it sound like knowing my name doesn't matter at all... Thanks a lot Trunks...

Paragus fell onto his knees in shock. He was still holding onto my hand with his head bowed. "I can't believe this; You're alive my precious long lost daughter."

"WHAT?!" Everyone says at once in complete amazement. "LONG LOST DAUGHTER?!"

"HAIL TANIA!" The green aliens announce as they turned their bodies my way.

Paragus nodded. "Yes, she's my daughter, but I always assumed you were dead all these years. I would not have ever expected that she would be with Prince Vegeta the entire time."

"Maybe, you got her confused with somebody else?" Gohan says in my defense, slapping his hand off of mine.

The saiyan shook his head. "No, she's the one. There was a beauty mark just below her right thumb on the palm side of her hand." He then showed his palm and he too had a beauty mark at the same spot as mine.

"H-He really is my d-dad!" I backed away a little frightened. Gohan gritted his teeth and clenched his fists. "I don't believe you, you're lying!"

Paragus glared. "I've had enough of you! Learn to respect your elders boy! If I remember correctly, Tania has a butterfly shaped birthmark on the back of her neck."

I felt someone lift up my hair. "Gohan, he's telling the truth; There is a butterfly shaped birthmark on the back of Tania's neck." Krillin clarified. I presumed that he noticed everyones sudden disappearance.

Gohan slowly unclenched his fists and ungritted his teeth. "I'm sorry for offending you, sir."

Paragus smiled, before Vegeta yelled, obviously being ignored had made him become annoyed and irritated. "What are you here for?!"

Paragus or now my 'dad' had turned his attention to the grouchy Vegeta. "I have come to graciously ask you to be the king of our new planet. Its name is New Vegeta, in your honor."

"What? There's a new Planet Vegeta?!"

Paragus then began explaining about how they'll be unstoppable if Vegeta agreed to be their new leader. Vegeta declined the offer and walked away. 'Father' still had his arms risen up.

I get the feeling Paragus or 'dad' is hiding something from me and everyone else. There's something more to him then he's leading on.

"You found the legendary super saiyan?" The saiyan prince asks after father had informed him about this legendary super saiyan person.

"Yes. He's wreaking havoc all over the south galaxy with his awsome power!" The eye-scarred saiyan explained. "At his current pace, even our new Planet Vegeta, that we strived so hard to build for you will be destroyed!"

That seemed to get Vegeta thinking and despite Trunks's warnings, Vegeta agreed to go with Paragus and began walking towards his ship.

I glared at Paragus with suspicions.

"Why glare at your old man Tania? You're my long lost daughter and I would like you to meet your older brother." Paragus responds after seeing the glare I gave him.

Now this is getting freaky; First I hear that this man is my real father even though my other dad was killed in a car incident... Though, I have to admit, my other dad didn't seem. anyway like me and yet, Paragus does? Second, he's saying I have an older brother whom I never met? What's going on here?!

My supposed dad then grabbed me by the arm gently and we began walking towards his prepared ship.

Gohan then appeared in front of the two of us. "I don't think so Mr."

He gave Paragus a glare and then said, "Let go of Tania now! I don't trust you, I feel as though you're hiding something more from us."

Dad gritted his teeth, but then relaxed himself and simply smiled. "If this is your attempt of impressing me so that you can date my daughter, it's a very bad way to start things off like this. If you don't trust me, why not accompany us on this journey of ours to destroy the saiyan causing problems across the galaxies?"

Gohan glanced at me then looked down, blushing slightly. I also began to turn red a little. Luckily for me, Paragus didn't notice. We began walking to the ship.

"Wait! Vegeta, Tania, Gohan, where you going?" Master Roshi, still being drunk asked as he attempted to board the ship. Krillin and Oolong was trying to take him off, but failed to as they slid down the door to the entrance landing on their faces. Paragus then thought it was best to find the prince and left. I then noticed Trunks sliding in just a moment before the hatch closed.

"Made it..." He annouces, moving a string of his long purple hair out of his eyesight. I noticed how Gohan was sitting on the floor criss-crossed, arms folded with slight irritation evident on his normally smiling, happy-go-lucky face.

"Aw cheer up Gohan..." I pleaded, giving the older saiyan boy a warm smile. "You're normally not grumpy like this." I took a seat next to the hybrid aand gave him a friendly hug. I guess that did the trick cause now he was grinning his fathers famous goofy grin.

"All better?"

Gohan nodded. "Yeah thanks, I needed that Tania."

"Anytime." I reply before looking around the ship. "Hmmm."

"What's wrong?" Questioned Vegeta's time traveling future son.

"Nothing really.." I answer Trunks. "Its just that I can't help but notice this ship has no windows at all, just walls."

He then began to observe the area a bit more. "You would think that they would want us to see New Vegeta with our own eyes."

"I think that we should keep our eye on Paragus. He seems like he's up to something." Gohan suggested.

I tightened the white sash around my waist, then took off my gray boots with pink laces and tossed it to the side along with my white wristbands. As I began to put my hair into a high ponytail, I thought to myself.

Paragus doesn't seem like such a bad guy... Maybe we're judging him too quickly without giving the guy a chance? He proved to me that he's my real dad. I mean, I never told anyone about the birthmark I had behind my neck. Not even Gohan! I have to admit, I want to get to know Paragus a little more, before I suspect anything from him. Who knows, maybe he'll turn out to be an amazing dad!

The ship's engine then turned on and the ship took off.