When you take a look at you old OC...

Hello everyone! Since I got nothing to do an I'm still looking for more ideas... Or actually writing more, but haven't finish any of them, yet. I just happened to found an interesting document when I browse over my old files.

Today I'll be criticizing my OC's old bio *shivers* I wrote this since I was 12 years old and it was half finished, so you'll all expect that there will be major clichés and cringes.

I NEVER look at my old stuffs in the past especially my old stories. Heck I really don't want to read my poems I wrote since I was in elementary school! 😱 This will be my nightmare...

*screams coming from the background*

Here we go...

Courtney Spires

I didn't think about that time to give her a Norse name. So it was supposed to be her real name.

Age: 25 years old
Rank: Dragon Master
Species: Half Human

What half?? Half horse? Half dragon? Half donkey? Please if you give your OC what type of species it is put what half is she/he.

Physical Description
Gender: Female
Height: 6 "4" feet

She's too tall no wonder I changed her height. But I don't mind since after all Vikings are friggin' tall as trees.

Weight: 42 kg

Did I just made her that skinny???

Description:
*Hair: Black
*Eyes: Right, fiery orange; and left, sky blue
Attire: turtleneck red long sleeve shirt, pleated grey skirt, dark red leggings, brown woolly boots, black gloves, chest belt buckle, and grey scarf.

Simple, but it is hard to imagine it and also, pleated skirts don't exists in that time.

Political Alignment and Abilities
Affiliation:
*A warrior
Abilities:
*fire wielder
*ice wielder
*speak dragonese
*shift form into a firebird or her so-called counter part
*night vision
*tears and blood can heal any injuries and diseases

... I don't remember putting that.

*the strength of the dragon
*great sense of smell
Likes:
*freedom
*flying
*pranks
*orange
*a peaceful world
*dangerous things
*exploring new places and things
*Hiccup Horrendous Haddock III and the other dragon riders
*Lightfoot
*a good master

A good master? What in the name of Thor did I just turned her into a pet??

Dislikes:
*getting caught

I feel ya

*personal enemy Skrill
*dragon trappers
*Drago Bludvist
*Drago Bludvist's Bewilderbeast
*stubborn people
*love ones died
Skills:
*high acrobatic skills and reflexes
*solving hard puzzles
*crystal control

Wut?

*hypnotizes anyone

Is she a snake or something? Well snakes are also reptiles like dragons...

*swordsmanship
*archery
*dagger
Moves and Techniques:
*air kick
*flame punch
*ice blast
*fire blast
*blizzard control
*shot more than one arrow in each targets

.........

Ability type:
*flight

She can fly?!

*fire power
*winter power

Why not fire and ice manipulation? Thor why didn't I think of that...

*communicating with creatures

It's dragonese!! DRAGONESE!!! *le scolding younger me*

*swordsmanship
*can destroy the whole army using here other form

Ok... What form?

Life:
Courtney never remember anything about her life as a human neither her real name. But she said that she accidentally tamed a rare ancient dragon called a Firebird (his real name is Talon), which gave her powers and it lives inside her.
Firebird's job is to guide people whoever enters a memory crystal. Courtney lives in an ice dome containing a sanctuary of dragons. Both Talon and Courtney have the same eyes, but their hair color and height are quite the opposite.

Opposite?

After more than three hundred years later, she thought her life grew better and better training dragons and teach a very few dragon masters. But her fate changes on that day when the first dragon war had started.

😨😨😨

*cringes at her whole background story* Thank Thor I changed her back story this is too much. 😰

*slumps in the corner and cries probably thinking about the human nature and how the world works* Curse you old me

Well there you have it... A sample that you will never ever going to SEE it.

Now don't mind me. I'm just gonna bury myself in this nice hole...
~Still traumatized... Cat