Sample #1: The Birth Of An Angel (Undertale x BATIM)
A Sample story for: Their Angel Sent From Above [Undertale AU]
(Demo Start!)
We see that Joey is driving towards his studio at night and in the backseat, was his paralyzed and hurt daughter; Alice Drew, who was laying down. She was hurt and scared. Why...just why did her own Father did this to her...? All she did was try to be the perfect daughter and all she got in return...was betrayal.
Alice: {Terrified, crying} P-Please...Father...w-why are you doing this to m-me? W-What did I do to deserve this...? E-Everything hurts..! Where are you taking me...? Please answer me!
Joey: {Annoyed} SHUT UP!! P-Perfect Angel's don't whine...! Besides...you'll thank me later~.
Alice: {Still terrified, crying} B-But I'm bleeding here, Father! I-I need something to cover up my wound! It hurts...and I still can't move!
Alice was right though, her wound is still opened blood was pouring out. However, Joey didn't answer his daughter at all. He completely ignored her cries of pain. Timeskip towards 25 minutes later, they have arrived at Joey Drew Studios. Joey got out of his car and started to dragged his weakened daughter inside the place.
Alice was scared as well as she felt very hopeless. She continued to begged her Father to stop this madness, but it fell towards deaf ears. As Joey arrived in his special room where the special ink machine is, he wasted no time in tying his still paralyzed and bleeding daughter towards a chair and making her face the ink machine pipe. Alice tried her very best and hardest to break free.
Alice: {Struggling, terrified, crying} P-Please, Father! Please stop this madness!! I-I won't tell anybody! I'll keep this a secret! It's not too late to change!! I'm begging you....please stop!
All Alice heard was silence as Joey continued to get the machine ready.
Alice: {Crying harder} P-Please.....Please Father....stop! You're scaring me! W-What do you plan on doing with that machine...?!
Joey: {Creepiest smile} Oh?~ The machine, my sweet angel? Well, I'm going to make you better. I'm going to turn you....into the perfect angel~. You'll become my new Alice Angel~ Don't worry...I already tested on the other workers that went missing and I am so close~.
What Joey said, what Alice's Father said, terrified her to the core. She just couldn't believe it. The workers that went missing months ago, was because of her Father....? He...He isn't human anymore, he's a monster! He killed those innocent people! She also couldn't believe that she was next. Going the drowned in Ink. Become Alice Angel..? She just couldn't believe that lie...right? Just then, Alice heard the machine was starting up.
Alice: {Terrified, begging} N-No...! P-Please...y-you don't have to do this..! T-This has to be a joke...! A nightmare at least! Please!
Joey: Hehe~. Sorry Angel, I have to make my dream come true~. You'll be thanking me later. You'll become the perfect angel! A true angel! Now let there be ink!
Alice: N-No!-
Alice didn't get to finish her sentence as gallons upon gallons of Ink was dumping onto her, filling her lungs as she tried to call out to her Father.........
....And now....everything turned dark as the ink consumed her....
-The End-
So, how was the demo for my story? Was is alright or meh? Well, don't worry as this chapter is just a demo. The real story will be better when a chapter of the prologue is out someday.
If you guys loved the demo of this chapter, then I hope you guys will give the real story a try and give it a vote please♡. Your votes helps me out with the stories as well.
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{Updated}
August 18, 2022
Thursday
Time: 12:05 pm
Words: 687
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