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Manan went to office..and cabir to malhotra mansion..

As always Nandini got down of car a few mins away and walked to office she entered first.. she met her few friends over their..wishing them morning and hi.. she went to her cabin..

After some time manik entered and directly went to his cabin..

As soon as he settled soha came with his coffee and told his scheduled..

M: cancel all my meeting after 4 today

Soha: ok sir..

M: bring me progress report of all the ongoing projects..

Soha : yes sir..

Manik was about to take a sip of his coffee but stopped abruptly and said..

M: uhm..mm.yeah.. take this coffee.. I don't want one..

Soha looked at him all confused..as manik wants his coffee the first thing in morning..

Soha: y sir.. is it not good..

M: stop asking stupid question..just do as said..

Soha with scared face took the cup and went out..

Here nandini was buzy giving beautiful designs to hr projects when her intercom rang ..

N: hello..

M: kya kr rahi ho.. thik ho na.. he asked been concerned..

N: m making designs n m all good..mani abhi  thodi der pehle to saath me office aye h..

M: u r sitting na..

N: haa baba

M: i love u..

N: luv u too..

Like this their half day passed..manik kept himself buzy is files.. n Nandini in her own work..

Manik was going through some project file when he found its not updated..

He called soha..

S: yes sir..

M: why is it not updated..he asked in a stern voice showing her the file..

S: sir..i.i..

M: stop stammering.. and tell me..

S: sir..i vl update it today..

M: call all the employees who are working on this project..rite now..

S: yess sir... saying this she ran from their..

Here nandini completed her work and decided to disturb manik unknown to the fact that he is gonna erupt as a volcano any time..

She called his intercom and at same time some employees entered and stood silently at a side..

Manik received the call..

M: hello..still in angry voice..

N: kya hua mani..

M: nothing will talk later.. he was about to keep the receiver back..

N: wait wait..

M: what..he asked being frustrated..

N: kb tk free hoge.. she asked being cute..

M: kitty its office where we work.. time pass ni karne aate.. so just keep the call.. let me work.. he took out his frustration on her.. and kept the call..

Here all were curious to know who is this kitty.. but kept quiet..

Nandini was little upset by the way he talked to her but mostly she was angry..
( Ab bhuk k wajah se h ya manik k..you guys think)

N: samjhta kya h khud ko.. we are here to work.. she wanted to go and punch on his face..but office h..

Here manik took a good class of all his employees then after sometime calmed himself and went to nandini cabin to see the cutest scene..

Nandini was sitting on sofa legs folded holding a pillow..with a angry pout blabbering something..

He silently went and sat beside her..

Nandini looked at him and turned to opposite side..

Manik smiled at her cute antics and picked her up and made her sit on his lap..

M: uffff...itna saara gussa... He said pecking her pout..

Nandini kept silent..

M: ohhoo..ye manik bhi na..pura befkuf h..itni pyaari si kitty ko daat diya..

Nandini wanted to bobble her head in yes but controled remembering she is gussa..

M:kitty..

Nandini gave him angry glare and then looked opposite side..

M: in his mind.. uff agar aaj fast ni hota to kha jata isse..itni  cute ku h ye.. thinking this he made her look at him and said..

M: kitty..m sry.. wo us waqt thoda gussa tha mai..

N: so..she said being angry..

M: so mani sorry h.. he said in cute voice..

N: she almost melted but kept angry face and said.. ni.. sorry rejected..

M: kitty..he called her with full of love..

Nandini looked at him and he kissed her nose.. and said..

M: ittu si nose me itna saara gussa.. he again kissed her nose..then cheeks..plz maaf kr do na.. your mani is really sorry..

N: but m still gussa..she said being the epitome of cuteness ..

M: accha tell me..what my kitty want her mani to do..jisse is cute si nose se saara gussa udd jaye..

Nandini thought for sometime then said... U vl do it???..

M: pakka..he said pinching his throat..

Nandini smiled and said you vl kick cabir on his bum.. tonight..

M: what..

N: haa..

M: pr why this..u can ask for anything na..

N: he teased me in the morning na..ab mai to usse aaj ladai ni kr sakti na.. bt tum to kick kr sakte ho na.. she justified herself..

M: seriously..

Nandu just nodded with a smile..

M: u r unbelievable..

N: i know..

M: fine i vl do it..he said giving up..

Nandu got happy and hugged him tight..

M: ab ghar chale its time..

Both went to their apartment and got ready

Nandini's dress

Manik looked at her and was numb for a minute...

M: wooww.. beautiful...

Nandini blushed

M: kitty..still lost in her beauty..

N: hmm.. she said combing her hair..

M: lets get married..

Nandini dropped her brush and looked at him with open mouth..

N: huh..

M: u look like a bride..i so wanna marry you rite now..

N: mani...

M: ab kya karu jaan.... I so wanna kiss you..but aaj to wo b ni kr sakta..

Their bubble broke due to a call.. neo call them and asked them to come fast..

Soon manan reached.. nandini was all time blushing and manik ..bechara was trying to control his emotions...

Every one praised nandu..and she was all the time blushing..

Nandini's parents were also there..

( Guys i don't know about this festival much..as m marwari..n mere yha karwachauth is wayy to simple and different..isliye for all the mistakes m sorry in advance..agar kuch galat lage to you can correct me..)

Neo took nandu to room and gave her a thaal and said..ye tumhari puja ki thaali h..abhi uppar hm sabhi ladies katha sunegi..
Toh be with me or maa.. jaisa hm bole do it..

Nandini took it and nodded..she was a little nervous..

Neo took thaal from her and kept it aside and hugged her..

Neo: bht pyaari lag ri h..aur dar mat.. mai hu na..

N: umm.. finally her all the emotions came running out..she had teary eye..

Neo broke the hug and said wiping her tears..

Shh..rote ni..i know how u r feeling.. beta ab tk u did it so perfectly..age b accha hi karegi.. see full day fast kar liya to puja to bht simple h.. haina..

Nandu just nodded and gave a small smile..

Neo: accha baith..i have something for you..

She made her sit and bought something from her dressing room..

She applied a small bindi on her forhead and made her stand and covered her head with duppata and pinned it..

Neo: tujhe pta h..hum ladies bindi ku lagati h..kuki hum jis jagah bindi lagate h..wo 1 powerful point h..shakti chakra hota h..we indian believe ki hamara control point hota h wo..so to protect it hm bindi lagate h..

Then she forwarded her hands and made her wear a simple but beautiful kada( bangles)

Neo: maa kehti h..ladkio k haath kabhi khali ni rehna chahiye.. inme chudiya saji rehni chahiye.. ye khushion ki nishani hoti h..

Neo: ab lag ri h meri sab se sunder bahu.. saying this she applied kajal behind her ears..

Nandini was having a different type of emotions.. which she never felt..

Neo: ab bahar chal..puja ka time hora..

Both moved out..here manik was buzy in attending guests with his dad..

Soon all the ladies were settled in terrace sitting in circle..they heard the katha and did puja..by pasing their thaal..

After puja all were waiting for moon to come up..

And neonika was introducing nandini to all her guests..

Now nandini started feeling hungry so she cutely asked neo

N: mom.. chaand to aa hi ni ra..

Neo smiled and said..hmm..aaj ye chaand bht tang karta h..

N: haa see its 7.. still no chand..

After sometime chaand appeared and every body gathered for puja..

Nandini was keenly observing neo nd dadi.. how they did.. then she also did the same.. but when she bent to touch manik's feet..he stopped her but she touched his feet and said.. i said na.. saare rules follow karna h..

Manik smiled and let her do.. he smiled seeing her satisfied that she did everything correctly.. he broke her fast by feeding her sweets and water and she also broke his fast..

Soon all came down.. there were lots of verity of food..

Soon all settled down had their food..  then nandu took blessings from all the elders..and every one gave her some gifts..

Dadu: manik tu kya laya doll k liye..

M: ku..

Dadu: khotya..aaj har pati..patni ko tohfe deta h..

M: pr wo to meri gf h..

Dadu: to..upaas to ki na tere liye..

M: chill dadu..aapki doll ka gift h mere pass..

Neo: to de na..

M: he came near nandini and took out a beautiful anklet and made her wear it..

All hooted for them and nandini turned into a red cherry

Ok guys a early and big update.. 2000 words..

So this time no hopes are their..i know only limited with comment..but m happy with them..

I always a asked for big and more comments because i loved reading them..the same way u guys love reading the update..

So hope you guys like the update..

to all my lovely wattpad family.. who always support me.. thankyou guys and love you all