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It was 3:00 in the morning when manik's phone was continuously ringing..

Manik got up with a irritated face but after seeing the caller name..he picked up and said

M: mmm mom..

Neo: good morning beta..

M: mom..its still night..

Neo: i know.. remember aaj karwachauth h.. m leaving for your house..with sargi.. nandu ko utha de..and ask her to get ready.. tell her to wear something indian..

M: but y this early..

Neo: after sunrise she can't eat..now getup fatafat.. saying this she disconnected the call..

Manik made a irritated face and looked up and murmured..uff ab ye sleeping beauty ko kaise uthau..  she vl be cranky..chal manik lag ja kaam pr..

Saying this he cares her hair and called her softly..

M: kitty..

N: mm..she said making herself more comfortable in the blanket..

M: get up..mom aari h..with sargi...

Nandini wokeup with jerk and said paniking ..shit..shit..m late.. maa aur daadi kya sochenge..

M: ohho..shhh..chup..u r not late..aur don't worry sb ko pta h u r d best..to koi kuch ni sochega..

N: pakka m not late..

Manik nodded in yes and kissed her cheeks..

M: good morning my love..

Nandini smiled and hugged him..then pecked his lips..

N: good morning..aur aaj only peck..no kissi.. fast h na..

M: what..fast aur mere kiss ka kya connection..

N: baad me bataungi..mjhe tayar hona h.. saying this she ran inside washroom and got ready..she came out wearing bathrobe and started searching for something to wear..

N: mani..kya pehnu mai..

M: kuch b pehen lo..haa but wear indian..maa boli h..

Nandini nodded and took out one red suit.. simple and elegent

After getting ready she asked manik who just came out after taking shower..

N: kaisi lag ri hu..she said twirling..

M: my red princess..saying this he kissed her cheeks and said in a cute tone..i want my kiss..

Nandini rolled her eyes and said..mani..its fast na.. can't kiss today..lets enjoy it the way it is.. not mending it in any way.. its for you mani..n mai koi risk ni le sakti with your life..plzz..

Manik hugged her and said.. as you say kitty. .. no kissi ..only huggy..nd lots of hugggsss...

Nandini giggled and said.. pagal..

N: accha now m going out..mom aati hi hongi..nd i have to see everything thing is okay or not.. saying this she ran out..

Soon full malhotra family reached with lots of shagun nd food.. with big smile and excitement and a very grumpy cabir..

Nandini touched their feet and took blessings..

N: dadu..aap itni subh ku uth gye..she asked being confused .. to which neonika replied..

Neo: papa bhi maa k liye fast karte and same with raj..

N: aww how cute boyfriend..saying this she hugged dadu..

Dadu: manik bhi to karra hoga na.. he asked nandini..

N: ni..mjhe to aise kuch ni bola manik ne.. and waise bhi dadu office me bht kaam rehta h ..he will get exhausted..

Neo:  ayey pr.. she was cut by dadi..

Dadi: use karna hoga to kar lega.. nandini sahi bol rahi h.... sargi shuru kare..

Soon all got settled in sofa and cabir slept on sofa.. to which nandini covered him with a comforter ..

All were about to start when manik came and sat beside nandini..

Neo with excitement asked.. tu fast kr ra h..

M: no mom..  saying this he was looking at nandini..who was smiling but a little sadness was their in her eyes..

Dadu: khotya..tu mjhse aur tere baap se kuch sikha ni h kya..

Raj: aur ni to kya.. 1 nalayak soya h..aur 1 ye..

Dadi: arey.. chup dono..

M: looking at dadi but his full consntration was on his kitty.. dadi.. fast karu..??.. you want me to do it?..

Dadi: teri marzi puttar..

Manik saw the glint in nandini's eyes and said.. soch rha hu kar leta hu.. meri life lambi kar k kya matlab rahega agar kitty ki life bhi lambi ni hui to.. saying this she looked at nandu whose eyes were shining due to tears which she was controlling

Soon all of them ate their sargi and dadi gave shagun to neo.. and neo gave to nandu and said ye shaam k liye saari h..aur jewellery bhi.. aur kuch shagun..nandu took her blessing then she touched everybody feets..

Dadu: chalo lets go..

Neo: haa bht saari tayariyan karna h.. and haa manu sham ko 4 bje tak ghar aa jana dono..late mat karna..

N: mom.. mai abhi chalu.. apki help kr dungi ..

Neo: ni beta..u rest..first time fast kar rahi ho..its not that easy .. aur waise bhi mjhe sb ni karna padta staff h na .. aur ye cabir kab kaam ayega..saying she was about to wake him up..when manik said

M: maa rehne do..gehri nind me h..sone do..jb uthega tb bhej dunga..

Raj: tu bigad de isse.. jaldi bhej dena.. lights and flowers ka department iska h..

M: ok..

Soon everybody went back and manan went back to their room..

M: kitty change kr k lets sleep..

N: hmm.. saying this she took comfortable dress for both and went to change..

Soon both were lying on bed.. cuddling..

N: i love you..

M: love you too kitty..

N: u sure..you wanna fast?.. you can't even drink water..

M: i know..nd ya i want to do it..

N: hmm.. but no work load for you also..

Manik smiled and said ok..

Soon both slept..

It was 10 when both wokeup and got ready for office and went down..

M: cabir ni utha..

Nandini looked at sofa and saw him sleeping..

N: ni.. still sleeping.. utha deti hu..

She went near him and said softly cabir..

No movement..

N: cabir..
No movement..

She went near his ears and shouted.. cabbbiiirr...

Cabir wokeup with jerk rubbing his ears...

C: nanduuu..he said in sleepy tone..

N: aur kitna soyega.. mom bht gussa h..

C: what ku... He said paniking

Manik came and sat beside him and said..

M: relax..  ni h gussa.. now getup..ja k fresh ho..then go home..mom ki help kr..

Canir hugged him and said gud morning bhai..and this jungli.. she is very bad..

Manik ruffled his hair..and smiled..

C: said softly..scold her na..

M: kitty.. aise koi karta h kya.. y did u shouted in his ears..

N: sry..

Cabir gave a victory smile..

N: joker..aaj maine mani ko promise kiya h no fighting..isliye m leaving you..

I vl try and update next part soon.. but guys plz understand my situation.. i have to handle office and home both..as my mom is not keeping well..

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