A romance novel by yxshi-

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Title:

It suits the story and also isn't common so good job with that. 20/20

Cover:

It has the two main leads which is good and also it suits the theme of the story, which is romance. But the quote at the top could be more visible other than that no complaints really. 19/20

Blurb:

The blurb is fine no complaints about it gives insight on Abella and how she has this "perfect life" with a dark past, typical. Wouldn't wanna make me read further also the fact you didn't even mention the other main lead (you did but it was only one paragraph) you HAVE to mention BOTH main leads, it will make readers confused. Also in the first lines "Abella is a strong headed woman who got past her traumatic past" It should've been:

"Abella is a strong headed twenty year old woman (or however old she is) who has got over her traumatic past." I suggest you get that edited. 11/20

Plot:

The storyline of two people having a traumatic past is very overused in a storyline but I can't really say anything since I'm too lazy plus I'm tired. 16/20

Writing Style:

You're writing is decent but.. not good? for example in chapter one:

"ARE YOU EVEN ALIVEEEE?!" I screamed. Instead it should've been

"ARE YOU EVEN ALIVE?!" I screamed. See how I killed off the extra e's? you don't need that when you're writing, only in text message scenes (if there are any) another error in chapter one is:

"Heyy love! Missing me?" He said, sounding out of breath probably due to practice. Instead it should've been:

"Hey love! Miss me?" He said, sounding out of breath probably due to practice. Again I killed off the y's you don't do this, it makes your writing look unprofessional. Another error is:

"I dailled his number and a picture of the two of us appeared on my screen. He is the best boyfriend. I miss him so much here. One thing I miss so much along with his presence, hugs, cuddles, and constant compliments of his dick." Instead it should've been:

"I dialed his number and a picture of the two of us appeared on my screen, he is the best boyfriend. I miss him so much here one thing I miss so much along with his presence, hugs, cuddles and his dick." There are more but I'm not gonna get into it, overall I suggest you use grammarly it corrects your grammar and punctuation. 6/15

Characters Self Growth:

To be honest, I'm tired from pointing out all those errors, I like Abella and Nicholas. I feel as if their relatable which is nice 14/15

Interest:

I'm sorry but my interest was low due to the grammar mistakes 2/5

Total:

It's a good book other than the grammar mistakes which I'm sure can be fixed if you take them to an editor, thank you for choosing me as your reviewer and have a good day/night.

65/100