6: Timber Man

This took WAY longer than it had to and I apologize! A magical realism novel by bosandaros

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Title:

Y'all need to stop making good titles, I'm giving 20's out like it's nothing. Jokes aside the title is good and it suits the plot well 20/20

Cover:

Not gonna lie I kinda expected like a man in timber, but instead it's just trees. If the title says "Timber Man" you're gonna expect a man in timber, so if you're gonna make your title "Timber Man" the cover should relate to the title. 17/20

Blurb:

Very.. mysterious, first off one con. You shouldn't reveal that Tim has powers to control the plants (spoiler alert!) you should kinda leave that in the story. Other than that very mysterious and makes me want to read more 19/20

Plot:

Since I've only read one chapter (literally) I can't tell if the plot is cliche or not, but I can say that the Prolouge makes me want to read more in my free time. 18/20

Writing Style:

Your writing style is good, I like how you describe what Tim is feeling in the prolouge and how you describe his daily life in chapter one. But one complaint you don't need to capitalize "The Forest" unless you're making a sentence you don't need to. 14/15

Characters Self Growth:

Since I only read one chapter and how it's only fourteen chapters, I can't judge this part. But I can say that I like Fiona and Tim's relationship, it's like a brother and sister which I'm sure people with siblings can relate to. 13/15

Interest:

The story is really nice and interesting in my opinion 5/5

Total:

I'm too lazy to write the whole thing but thanks for choosing me as your reviewer and hope you have a good day/night

80/100

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