A short story by RavingBlack

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Title:

I haven't seen a title like yours, a new fresh title that can easily be remembered. So good job with that. 20/20

Cover:

The cover is fine, just the font is not good. Maybe try using another font because I can barely see the author's name, author than that it's fine. 17/20

Blurb:

The blurb is fine, doesn't reveal much about the story or the characters. Which is I guess.. good? Since I barely read short stories I can't comment much on this, but I would suggest introduce the characters at some point (if you can). 18/20

Plot:

I haven't seen a plot like yours so props for that, even if I did the way you paced your book was nice and not too fast not too slow just right. 20/20

Writing Style:

The way you described the setting and other things in that matter is incredible the way you did it, so good job with that. Overall I have no issues with the writing 15/15

Characters Self Growth:

I'm not the best at reviewing short stories so I really don't know how to describe this, but I can say that Ville is a sassy type of character (in my opinion) but I really don't know who's the main character in the story so be sure to remember that when writing a story. 13/15

Interest:

I can say overall that it's a very interesting book even though I don't read the short story genre 5/5

Total:

Overall a very interesting book like I said before just work on the cover and the characters and organizing them, no complaints really. Good book and thank you for choosing me to review your book and have a good day/night

98/100