A teen fiction romance novel by @softhartz

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Title:

Seeing as it suits the story well I would give it a 20/20 but I won't since the title is very common and overused, maybe you could turn the words like "Love Paralyzed" or something like that. 10/20

Cover:

The cover is nice and the theme is also nice, has everything it needs to be a proper cover. 20/20

Blurb:

Gives a lot of information about the characters and the plot, which is good but also bad. You don't wanna give TOO much about the characters like leave that in the chapters to come but overall I see no typos or anything really wrong with it 19/20

Plot:

Now the plot.. I've read seven chapters and I feel the plot is very... slow paced? It's not fast nor slow, so that's a good thing? But the plot is cliche which is fine we all love cliche plots once in a while. 14/20

Writing Style:

Now this.. this.. your writing is so so so good, like the way you described Ava's anxiety/panic attack in chapter 4 (correct me if I'm wrong) the words you used, you made the reader feel empathy for Ava even though she's a fictional character so good job with that 15/15

Characters Self Growth:

Now I've only read seven chapters (I think) but I can say that I can picture Ava and Jesse's relationship growing, their meeting in the first chapter was not unique but I can still see the closeness in them even though they just met! so once again good job with that 13/15

Interest:

My interest level was very high due to the words you've used to describe characters emotions. 5/5

Total:

Overall nothing you really need to work on, good job with word choice and describing the characters emotions. Thank you for choosing me to review your wonderful book and have a good day/night! 

96/100