A fanfiction by Eulissah

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Title:

I haven't seen a title like that in so long, a new fresh title. So good job with that 20/20

Cover:

I feel like the cover is just four images crapped into one, it's crowded and.. not good (in my opinion) there is graphic shops on wattpad or Canva where you can make a cover or you can go to the graphic shop and have them make one for you 7/20

Blurb:

The blurb is.. horrible (in my opinion) first of all the "1" which you put in your blurb should be "one" to make it look professional, remember nowadays blurb matters on wattpad. Second the blurb gives on insight on the story and it's short like WAY WAY WAY too short, it makes readers click off. At least tell the readers about the characters or the story 3/20

 Plot:

I can see that Jimin is trying to propose to his boyfriend Jungkook but failing five times (like you said in your blurb) it's kinda.. cliche if you ask me, I can't remember where I've seen the plot from but I've seen it somewhere. 10/20

Character Development:

Since I have no idea who the people who you're talking about I can't really say if there's chracter development or not. 6/15

Interest:

I'm not a fan of BTS so my interest is.. kinda low (no offense) 3/5

Total:

You have a lot of things you need to work on the blurb, cover and making an original plot line. But who doesn't love a good trope every once and a while? I know I do! Just work on those things and I'm sure it'll be a work of art! Thanks for choosing me and have a good day/night

49/100