A Romance Novel by @JK_Is_Bunny

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Title:

It suits the story really well and it's also VERY unique like.. I haven't seen anything like that and in fact when I search it up your book is the FIRST that pops up! so props for that 20/20

Cover:

I feel like.. the cover.. the girl? I don't really know what the girl has to do with the story, I suggest you go for something like a diary with words on it. 16/20

Blurb:

Now the blurb.. gives no insight on the story whatsoever, it's an excerpt from the book which you can add at the end or something in between but DON'T make it your full blurb. It makes readers draw away from the book no matter how interesting the title/cover is 10/20

Plot:

Now this.. having read the book and voted on it before you even filled out a form I can say that the plot is.. not unique, like it's a diary and a girl (Selena) writing about her crush. I've seen many plots on that don't get me wrong it's a great book but.. I feel the trope is.. overused 10/20

Writing Style:

Your writing style is great, the way you expressed the characters emotions.. is unreal! Like the words you use is so good that I had to re-read, I found no errors in your spelling which is good. Overall your writing style is perfect 15/15

Characters Self Growth:

I feel like.. Selena at the first chapter was.. how do I say this? fangirling over Noah? but in like the end she matured (at least in my opinion) for Noah however.. I seen no self growth even though he's a main character, I feel like you shouldn't add characters if they don't do anything to grow the plot. Yeah sure he's Selena's first love but does he really help the plot? is this character really important to the plot? Ask these questions when creating the characters. 9/15

Interest:

Overall the story is really good, if you use the suggestions I gave you it would be a masterpiece! 5/5

Total:

It's a really good book other than the character department, plot and the cover. Other than that I have really no complaints! Thank you for choosing me and have a good day/night

85/100