Wanting to redo some old ocs

Has anyone ever get the feeling that they want to redo their old ocs that they made year ago? Like you feel like they're Mary Sues don't have emotions no backstories or don't make no sense? That's what I'm feeling right now.

I want to redo the ocs that I made back when I did Transformers Animated Season 4 cause when I did my first ocs I didn't know what I was doing cause before I made Transformers ocs I made 5 or 9 creepypastas ocs and 1 Hetalia oc (which now I have three Hetalia ocs) and now since I've made Transformers ocs they have made a lot of sense cause they have backstories and emotions. So let's use an example on of my ocs that I made back ages ago

Hmmmm.... Oh I know

Cäsium.

Cäsium: ah scrap ._.

Now Cäsium was my first oc that I made when doing Transformers Animated Season 4, the chapter I believe he came in was *goes and look at what chapter he came in* it was chapter 4 tell me the truth where he was a prison guard but I don't think I ever gave him emotions and a personality. Did I Cäsium?

Cäsium: no you didn't, you gave me a boring life.

Okay see? That's what I mean Cäsium doesn't have those and plus his colors are to boring all he is just blue with no other colors and his alt mode is not awesome its a Volkswagen. I'm starting to think why I don't use Cäsium so much.

So....

*Kicks Cäsium out to use another oc or two*

Lunar and Eclipse

Now Lunar and Eclipse are my second and third but first twin ocs that I made after I created Cäsium. And they kind of have a backstory.

Eclipse betrayed the Autobots and joined the Decepticons and it made Lunar hurt that her own twin betrayed her also. But! Do we know why Eclipse betrayed the Autobots and joined the Decepticons? No, no we don't, I never explained why Eclipse did that. Plus I never gave their emotions either.

Lunar: we have a question.

Eclipse: if we're twins than how come we don't have the almost same color *Lunar is silver while Eclipse is cherry red*

Uh good question, I don't know either

*Kicks the twins off the stage*

Okay now do you see where I'm getting at? None of my old ocs make sense, they don't have backstories emotions or anything at all and look at my other ocs.

Like Enzo, HorusLight Sable, Viking, Valkyrie, Dyami, Lear, Takeshi, HuntressReaper, Atlanshia, Nishant and Shi Renzu. They have emotions and have backstories.

For example

HorusLight

HorusLight's emotions are strict fatherly and overprotective. But under those emotions of his, he's depressed, why? His sparkmate Mahinna was murdered by his brother TatciumBlade or now as BloodKnife (HuntressNuva if I got the names wrong please let me know) and he thought his own daughter IsisLight was killed but she's been alive the whole time serving the cons cause she got lied to that her own sire was killed by Autobots but he's alive.

Nishant

Like HorusLight, he's strict and overprotective but his sparkmate CreeDusk died giving birth to ShadowCopy, Nishant was struck with grief losing the love of his life but he couldn't give up he had to raise ShadowCopy for CreeDusk sake.

See what I'm saying?

This why I'm going to redo my old ocs to make them better give them emotions and backstories.

Okay I'm done I got nothing else to say

-HecatePrime is tired only been up for 2 hours and is going to take a nap for awhile than has to go cover a shift tonight.

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