Starflight53's Oc

Name:Amy/Amethyst

Species: Gem

 Weapon: transparent light lavender sword

Appearance: a bit taller than a pearl, skinny, fuchsia eyes, light lavender skin, long white hair, white crop top and ripped shorts. Her gem is on her left cheek.

Backstory: she was a disfigured Amethyst looked down on by White diamond, so she ran away onto a ship leaving to Earth, with other terrified gems known as: *these ones are my friend's OCs* Teal Diamond-a disfigured diamond taller than a garnet-, Opal, Peridot, and Sapphire. They weren't much like the crystal gems so when they met them they decided to settle down somewhere else. The group became the Earthbound gems, and they were a lot more clumsy than the crystal gems. Amethyst decides to nickname herself Amy as to not confuse herself with the other Amethyst at age 135. *it's young in gem times*

Thoughts: Ah. Another great oc! I really like it! It is so refreshing to see something original for once! There is only one thing I would like to point out, but it's more of a nitpick. Why is the sword transparent? Our amethyst is a runt and her whip is not transparent. I feel that maybe you could make it work if you explained it a little more. Anyway, I think this is a pretty good gemsona, I feel it just needs a bit more backstory.

Rating: 9/10

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