sso_sabby's GF oc

Name: Autumn Moor

Type: Human

Looks: brown hair with purple tips; one purple eye and one blue eye; white tank top, gray and purple sweater, ripped blue jeans, brown combat boots, dog tag necklace

Weapon (she carries around a weapon... don't ask y): battle axe

Backstory: Autumn lives in the middle of the forest in gravity falls. Her mom and dad died from a supernatural incident. She studied with Stanford back in the day, but left after they meet bill. Bill has haunted her ever since, but one day Autumn had enough of Bill and decided to make a deal with him so he will leave her alone. When she summoned bill, they soon became friends. They have helped each other out and done good. One day, Bill and Autumn got into a fight and bill hit her with a spell causing half of her face to become corrupted. It has slowly be turning green ever since.

Thoughts: So, I like most parts of the design! Like the dog tag necklace, the purple tips, tyhe brown combat boots, and the ripped blue jeans! Those are all creative and unique! Also,  I love the name! There are some things that I would change, though. For example, the fact that she worked with Ford. For her to work with ford, and still be in the time of gravity fall, she would be an old lady, which makes the brown hair with purple tips, the ripped jeans, combat boots, and the dog tag necklace seem out of place. Also, this goes along with the old lady thing, an old lady would not be able to carry around a battle axe! I would suggest changing her time period, and not having her work for Ford. Also, and I am fully aware that I state this in almost every chapter, it is not a very good idea to have direct-relationships with main characters.

Rating: 6 1/2 /10

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