Name: Ankha Flash

Type: earth

Species: Egyptian pony

Colors: base: really light gray. Mane and Tail: turquoise

Cutiemark: pyramid with a crown in front because she's the princess of Egypt.

Back Story: Ankha Flash lived in a palace of Egyptian ponies. At the palace was a party and Ankha's 13th birthday was celebrated and after the party, she would choose who she marries. (Yep. Ponies get married at that young of age) turns out on the night of the party, she has to marry the colt her father, the king, chooses for her. The colt was actually the bully in her school. It was that night she ran away and didn't want to come back to the palace and ran off into the sand storm. Her crush, Breezer, saw her in the storm and saved her from being buried alive. Ankha found her love and admitted her feelings. When she returned to the palace, she told the kingdom her love, Breezer. The two were about to kiss but the father caught them and she and the bully, Razor were forced to get married. After their marriage, Ankha Flash sneaked out of the palace and ran away to live with Breezer forever. The King and Queen saw a note Ankha left and cried.

Thoughts: I really like this oc. The backstory is very original. But, I feel like it could have some more good things in it. Like she eventually came back to the palace and married Breezer. But, Other than that I really like the backstory and its originality. I also like see that the oc is a princess but still an earth pony. It shows that you don't have to be an alicorn to be a princess. Another thing is, the color scheme sounds like it could be improved a bit. You should make the hair a lighter color. But other than that, this sounds like a great oc!

Rating: 7/10