glocks_player_20
Name: Night Star
Type: Unicorn
Species: Pony
Color: Violet skin blue eyes
Cutie Mark: shooting star
Back Story: Night Star lived in the Evergreen forest and she seemed like a very happy and bouncy pony on the outside but on the inside she had very dark thoughts
Thoughts: I really like the color scheme for this oc. I also love the name! The only thing I can find wrong with this oc is its backstory. It feels just a bit to short. Just add some more details and it should be a lot better!
Rating: 8/10
Also I want people to know that I really want to judge more ocs from other fandoms to. If you already submitted a pony oc, you can submit an oc for the other fandoms I mentioned on the first chapter.Bye!
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