I changed my Oc a bit. here's the info.

Name: Carol Note

Age: the same age as the mane 6

Type: Unicorn

Looks: have light aqua skin and dark blue eyes. Her man and tail bouncy but kind of lose and is also light pink and blue. In her hair she has in a small pink bow near her one ear. And her cutie mark is a heart shape eighth note crossed with a pencil.

Personality: Is generally a nice person. Loves to play/listen to music and write stories. She would do anything for her friends.

Back story: Carol was abandoned by her family at a very young age. After walking into ponyville one day she was taken in by Sunny Days (Mother of Cheerilee). One day while Carol was at school she had met a group of ponies who had made fun of her due to the fact she had no real family. She had complete flipped out and try to hurt the ponies who had made fun of her. Before things got out of hand she realized what she was doing. She was ashameded of it and ran off to the ever free forest. She had thought about killing herself but then one of her classmates walked into the forest looking for her. Her classmate, Pinkie Pie, had stopped her from making a terrible mistake. After finding out Carol had no friends Pinkie agreed to be her friend.

Friends: Pinkie, Color Scheme (Pegasus), Mintie Green (Unicorn)

Crush: Pinkie Pie

Secret: Has a secret dark side.

Strengths: Playing music

Weakness: People making fun friends or her (mainly her friends though)

Thoughts: This is a really good oc! The relationship with pinkie pie is cute! I think that their is a kinda good balance between good and bad. Like her getting adopted by cheerilee's  mother, and her being friends with pinkie pie... and wait... my oc!!! Color Scheme!!! OMG!!! I'm assuming that Mintie Green is another oc. Anyways, I would advise adding at least 1 more good thing in there. So, I really like your new oc!  I hope you take my advise! Bye!!!

Rating: 9/10