Name: Flamethrower

Type: Unicorn

Species: ghost

Looks: A dirty sunglow coat, a long messy, curly black and red mane and tail, and yellow or red eyes. She usually wears a black crown with white gems in it.

Cutiemark: A ball of fire with a tail of black magic

Backstory: Flamethrower lived a moderately good life with her parents, and three sisters. Being the eldest of four can be hard, especially when time calls to protect them. Flames mom died because of a deadly disease known as the Scarlet Death, and Flame had to protect them from her father. Her sisters had no idea what her father did wrong, but he hurt Flame.Eventually Flame was old enough to sign up her and her sisters up for an overnight magic school where they could live away from there father.Flame was already teaching herself dark magic, but could never master light magic. Her teacher couldn't see enough good in flame to teach her anything higher.Flamethrowers overall bad, cold attitude got her detention in the basement one day, where she found her crown. The crown was cursed with possession, so whoever wears it would be trapped with an eternally dark soul.That night Flame killed her father, and two of her sisters.No longer able to contain the pain and guilt she felt, flame jumped off the side of a building, ending her life.And from then on her soul was free to kill whoever she pleased.

Personality: Sarcastic, tense, mature, and very energetic, fierce, and tries to act as emotionless as she can. She is also quite mean, and likes to mock other ponies, but if your on her good side, she can be one of the nicest ponies you'll ever meet. Flame also has surious trust issues.But to anyone she loves she can be kind, gentle, mischievous, funny, and overall a pretty good pony.

Thoughts: I really like the design of your oc and it also has a very interesting backstory.  The backstory is also very unique. But, the backstory is way to dark. The only  good things in it was in the beginning it  said she lived a moderately good life. Also, kind of when it said her soul was free and could kill whoever she pleased. I think that if you just add more good things in the backstory, like she used dark magic to bring her mother back, or something like that,it would be a lot better. Also, I really like the name of your oc, Flamethrower. Anyways, I hope you agree with what I said and you make those adjustments.

Rating: 6/10