elementalart's oc
Name: Autumn Moor
Type: Human
Looks: brown hair with purple tips; one purple eye and one blue eye; white tank top, gray and purple sweater, ripped blue jeans, brown combat boots, dog tag necklace
Weapon (she carries around a weapon... don't ask y): battle axe
Backstory: Autumn lives in the middle of the forest in gravity falls. Her mom and dad died from a supernatural incident. She studied with Stanford back in the day, but left after they meet bill. Bill has haunted her ever since, but one day Autumn had enough of Bill and decided to make a deal with him so he will leave her alone. When she summoned bill, they soon became friends. They have helped each other out and done good. One day, Bill and Autumn got into a fight and bill hit her with a spell causing half of her face to become corrupted. It has slowly be turning green ever since.
Thoughts: Wow! I'm impressed! This oc sounds really good! The only thing I can think that's wrong with this oc is what was the supernatural incident and what happened after the end of your backstory, where it says "It has slowly be turning green ever since.". But other than that, this is a really well made oc.
Rating: 9/10
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