CakieKyla's SU Oc
Name: Cocoa/Chocolate Pearl
Gem or Human: Gem
Weapon: Chocolate looking Bombs
Colours: Her hair is in a rectangle like shape, with the long sides being vertical. The colour of her hair is an extremely dark brown, almost black. Her skin is a mud brown and her eyes are a very light brown. Her clothes consist of a medium brown tight crop top with no sleeves and a turtle neck-like Neckline. Her bottoms are a pair of light brown capri's. The Tim of her pants, ends of her sleeves, and the bottom of her crop top are all translucent and tinted brown. Finally, her gem is on her right upper arm.
Backstory: When on HomeWorld, she had been made to serve a brown coloured gem (who I might decide on if I make Cocoa an official OC) but got used. Cocoa was used for power against the enemies, but when Cocoa finally refused...she got her gem cracked and sent out into space to fully shatter. Luckily, right before her Gem was going to Crack, she landed on Earth and met the Crystal Gems, her gem quickly being healed.
Thoughts: I like it! I think it fits into the universe! The biggest thing I have to say to criticize this is the weapon. While the idea of chocolate looking bombs is really cool, I just don't think it is a fitting weapon for a pearl. Look at the ruby's. Our ruby has a gauntlet while eyeball has a dagger. Two very different weapons, yet both serving a similar purpose, hand- to-hand combat. Maybe you could save the bombs for Cocoa Also, though this is very minor and optional, I feel like the trope of meeting the crystal gems is a little overused. Maybe she could just land in a random part of Earth and attempt to adjust to her new surroundings. That would be interesting!
Rating: 7 1/2 out of 10
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