Warning: I will delete this chapter if I don't get any votes or comments or whatever. It's just that I'm super sensitive, and I'll feel like I'm making a huge fool of myself.

So down below are Lily and Hazel in their funeral garb. This first one is just of them standing together in the graveyard with headstones and stuff.

*cringes* Yeah, it's bad. Maybe you could tell me how to improve? I'd really appreciate it.

I mean, I can't even tell what message this drawing's supposed to deliver. Like seriously, WHY is Hazel tossing a frickin knife in the air? And what is Lily doing, scattering those flower petals on the ground? Most importantly, WHO is the owner of that knife sticking up from the ground next to Lily? Is it Ariel?!

So basically, please comment your opinion!