Entered into LemonyFox's OC Rater. 

Name: Smokefrost ( received an 8/10 ) 

Gender: Tom 

Clan: ShadowClan ( received a 10/10 ) 

Description: A dark shadowy tom-cat with misty grey streaks throughout his pelt. He has icy white paws and patches on his legs and tail, and a mask across his face. His ears are long and pointy and has a large nick in one from a battle. His fur is soft and feathery but rather short, and his legs are long and well suited for his lean, fit body. His eyes are a soft chocolatey brown colour with light amber encircling the iris. ( received a 10/10 )

Personality: He's pretty rough around the edges and is often cold and distant from others because he's not very good at socialising. He's stubborn and often resorts to questionable methods to win battles or get what he wants. However, he's much softer and kinder on the inside, and it shows when he is around kits. He's incredibly loyal to his clan and would die in a heartbeat for the few friends he's kept around. ( received a 9/10 ) 

Quick Summary: Born as a rogue kit, he was taken in by Owlfoot and Rowanwing of ShadowClan after he was found on the border of Twolegplace. He was raised as an only kit and was often looked down upon because he wasn't born in the clan. He made temporary friendships with the other kits, but only three of them really stuck around. The first was Hazekit, a pretty white she-cat with misty grey tinting her fur and with a long, feathery pelt and forest green eyes. The second was Woodkit, a dark brown tabby tom-kit with black markings and a crippled back leg. His leg was twisted and deformed, and his eyes were a sharp, focused hazel colour. The last one was Cinderkit, a grey tom-kit with bright white patches and soft blue eyes. Smokekit grew up with them, lasting through apprenticeship without any major events. Of course, that was going to change. When the four had received their warrior names ( Smokefrost, Hazepelt, Woodlark, and Cinderstone ) a battle was declared against ThunderClan. They fought valiantly, but Smokefrost lost sight in one eye and Woodlark was killed, due to his injured leg not allowing him to get away. Combined in grief, Smokefrost and Hazepelt grew closer and eventually fell for one another, but Cinderstone grew jealous. He was the third wheel, always left out now, and he hated it. After the two became mates, he vowed to take their kits and leave for ThunderClan, knowing they would never fight against the clan that killed their friend for fear of being killed themselves. However, when Hazepelt did have kits, Cinderstone began doubting himself. After all, how could he turn upon his two best friends? He eradicated his plans and instead served as an uncle towards the kits, finally being included in their lives again. At this, Smokefrost became much happier, and soon, he became deputy after Nutclaw decided to retire. To this day, he remains deputy of ShadowClan with a faithful mate and kits and a few good friends. ( received a 9/10 ) 

Mate: Hazepelt ( pretty white she-cat with grey tinting in her fur and a long feathery pelt with forest green eyes )

Kits: Woodkit, named after their old friend. He's a white tom-kit with brownish-black tabby stripes and brown-black undersides. His eyes are soft brown.

Ravenkit, a black tom-kit with a large white splotch across his back and muzzle. His ears are pointed like his fathers, and he has the same lean build. His eyes are a bright, clear forest green. ( received an 8/10 ) 

Overall Grade Recieved: 54/60