Entered into Yumm44's OC Rater

Name: Owlgaze ( received an 8/10 )

Gender: Male 

Age: 32 moons

Clan: ShadowClan ( received a 10/10 ) 

Appearance: A dark muddy brown tom with a dusty brownish-grey underbelly. His tail is short and feathery, like the rest of his coat. He has dark black spots ranging in size that dapple his back, and he has amber coloured paws. His toes-the very tips of his paws-are white. His eyes are large and owl-like, and are a glaring yellow colour. ( received a 10/10 ) 

Personality: He's very smart and cunning, with a lot of ambition. He loves hunting and fighting and that brings out his good side. He's very sweet and caring towards kits but he's not afraid to speak his mind to older cats. He's pretty stubborn and sticks up for what he believes in. ( received a 7/10 ) 

Brief-ish Backstory: He was born in a litter of three, but his other two sibling were stillborn and his mother died shortly after. His father Shadefoot took care of him well and would always tell him dreamy stories of his mother. Owlkit sought to be as kind and outspoken and her, and when he was apprenticed these qualities showed. He developed feelings for another apprentice, Hawkpaw, but was afraid of confessing his feelings because Hawkpaw was also a tom. When he became a warrior he finally told Hawkpaw and discovered that they both had similar feelings. They agreed to become mates and told the rest of the clan. While most of the clan was accepting, Duskleaf, a calico she-cat who had been pursuing Owlgaze, was not. She cornered Owlgaze one night and attacked, and he was forced to kill her out of self-defence. He told the clan leader what happened and he was forgiven, but it took a long time for him to earn back others trust. He and Hawkwhisper adopted three surrogate kits. ( received a 6/10 ) 

Mate: Hawkwhisper ( dappled brown and black tom with bright amber eyes )

Kits: Maplepaw ( calico she-cat with soft amber eyes ), Russetpaw ( reddish-brown she-cat with black spots on her back and sharp yellow eyes ), and Reedpaw ( a dusty brown tom with brown and black patches and amber eyes ) ( received a 7/10 ) 

Overall Rating: 48/60