HEY, BABES.

OKAY, so i need help. help with my description for my rollynch book - becky + seth. It will be called Hate. I'm rewriting it, on my sec account glowroiusnao

just tell me if this description is good or not. does it make sense or not?

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His chocolate brown and her hazel green eyes met each other, after they gathered themselves from a bump.

As soon as they realized to whom they had bumped into, their eyes instantly filled with hate, anger and they backed a little backwards from each other. They hated each other with passion, the passion that they didn't even know where was stored in them.

People tried to ask what's the problem with them but they never got answered.

The reason them hating each other was only known by them.

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I'm still working on it. if you could help with it, i will appreciate it much!

—see you, much love! 🌸