Chapter 9

- Trans

- Then all of a suddenly, an horrible man…

- red eyes and no nose and everything started flying towards me on a broomstick! He didn’t have a nose…

- all black

- It was…… Voldemort!

- of

- his sexah

- too many “and’s

- Paragraph insert

- Voldemort got a dude-ur-so-retarded

- Run-on

- all sad

- comma add

- geddit

- all mad

- expelled

- all depressed

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