Surpriseeeeee........ I'm back

Don't be shocked guy my exams are postponed so I couldn't stop myself and came back.  I will take break from December 1.

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Neela - aap sach bol rehe hain... thank you Ashish...main abhi sab ko batati hun Avni toh khusi se pagal ho jayegi

   Neela was about to go but Ashish stopped her

Ashish - ruko Neela...sayad tumne thik se suna nehi...maine kaha ki pehele use mere test main pass hona padega

Neela - han par yeh baat Neil ko toh batani padegi ki aap uska test lene wale hain

Ashish - nehi....yeh baat sirf hum dono ki bich rehegi.... Neil ko yeh baat pata nehi chalni chahiye warna test ka kya faida....wo kitne ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai...use bina bataye main uska test lunga agar wo pass ho gaya toh Avni ki shadi Neil se hi hogi

Neela - thik hai Ashish jesa aapko thik lage...par mujhe pura yakin hai ki Neil pass ho jayega

  Ashish rolled his eyes and went out

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Avni's room

Sweta - thik hai beta aapna khayal rakhna hum chalte hain ( caressing her hairs )

Avni - thodi der aur ruk jaona ( pouts )

Bebe - puttar abhi hume jana padega par hum aayenge na phir tumse Milne

Avni - thik hai ( making a sad pout )

Neil - baby, main hun na yahan don't be sad ( Avni smile )

Karina - aap yahan permanently shift kyun nehi ho jate

Neil - mera sasural hai main yahan jab tak chahe ruk sakta hu tujhe koi problem hai isse

Karina - mujhe kyun problem hogi... Mujhe toh khusi hogi...aap chinta mat karo main aapka saman yahan bhej dungi aur main aapki new pink wali room main shift ho jaungi

  Before Neil could reply her Ashish came there

Ashish - Han Karina beta Neil ka saman bhijwa dena kyun ki hum Neil ko kuch dino ke liye hamara meheman banana chahate hain

   Ashish said shocking everyone

Neil - what did you just said ( he couldn't believed what he said )

Ashish - zyada khuss mat ho...main yeh sab meri princess ke liye kar raha hum...jab tak wo puri tarah se thik nehi ho jati tum yahan ruk sakte ho

   Avni runs to Ashish and hugged him

Avni - thank you Dadda..I love you

Ashish - I love you too princess aur yeh sab main tumhare liye hi kar raha hu

   Ashish kissed her forehead making her smile but Neil was still not convinced that Ashish wants him to stay with Avni.

Neil in mind - mujhe asa kyun lag raha hai ki isse pichhe aapki koi aur intention hai susur ji....if you are playing some game than be ready to lose ( smirked )

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    Avni was watching TV with Khusi and Neil was in his office.

   There was a scene going on TV in which main lead of serial saying that -  ' pati ke dil tak ta rasta uske pet se hoke jata hai '

Khusi - are yeh toh meri mom bhi bolti hain

Avni thinks something and smile widely

Avni - main bhi Neil ke liye khana banaungi ( excitedly )

Khusi - par tumhe toh khana banana nehi aata na ( Avni pours )

Avni - ummm ( taping her chin )... idea mamma hain na....main mamma ki help se bana lungi

Avni came to kitchen. Neela was making batter for pakora.

Neela - bachcha kuch chahiye kya

Avni - mamma mujhe Neil ke liye khana banana hai ( smiling )

   Neela's jaws dropped after hearing her

Neela - bachcha par tumhe toh gas on karna bhi nehi aata

Avni - par mamma aap meri help karna na... please mamma mujhe Neil ko khus karna hai

Neela smiled and agreed to help her

Neela - achha batao kya banana chahati ho tum

Avni - aap yeh kya bana rehi ho

Neela - yeh pakode ke liye bater hai.. tumhare dadda ka favourite ( smiling )

Avni - toh main bhi Neelu ke liye pakode banaungi ( excitedly )

Neela - thik hai....pehele jao apna haath dholo

   Avni noded and washed her hands

Neela - bachcha dekho pehele main jese karungi wese karna han ( Avni nods )

    Neela shows her how to make pakoda

Avni - mamma ab main banaungi

   Ashish comes there searching for Neela

Ashish - Neela wo maine kal tumhe jo file di thi wo kahan hai mujhe nehi mil rehi

Neela - ek min main leke aati hun

   Neela went out to bring his file

Ashish - princess what are you doing here

Avni - Dadda main aaj Neil ke liye pokode banaungi khud

Ashish - what.... princess you don't need to do this

Ashish in mind - aur us Neil ke liye toh bilkul bhi nehi...he don't deserve you priencess.

Avni - Dadda please....I want to give him surprise, he always gives me surprise now it's my turn ( she made a puppy face )

Ashish - thik hai princess par sambhal ke I don't want you to hurt yourself ( Avni smiled )

Avni - ok dadda

Ashish - princess wo fridge se pani ka bottle dena please

   Avni nods and went near fridge. When Ashish saw Avni was standing back facing him he took chili powder and add half bottle of it in batter. He stirred it well so Avni can't get to know it. Avni came with a water bottle and gave it to Ashish

Ashish - thank you princess

Ashish in mind - aaj toh wo Neil asi pokode khayega ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhega ( smirked )

   Neela came with a file and Ashish takes that file and went out

Avni - mamma ab main banau

Neela - han bachcha par sambhal kar bater  dalna han oil bahut garam hai

Avni - ok mamma

   Avni takes some batter in her hand and poured it carefully in oil than took it out after sometime.

Avni - yeh mene pokode bana liya ( claping her hands )

    In excitement she starts dancing and her hand hits the hot pan but fortunately oil didn't fall on her hand.

Avni - ahhhh....mamma ( screamed in pain )

Neela - Avni...bachcha maine kaha tha na sambhal ke karna

    Neela washed her hand with water and rubbed ice on it.

Avni - mamma it's paining ( sobbing )

Neela - meri bachchi ( blowing air on her wound )

     After sometime she calm down

Avni - mamma Neelu aur dadda ko mat batana please....warna wo mujhe daantenge ( pouts )

Neela - tum kam hi asi karti ho daant toh khaogi na....kaha tha na sambhal ke karna

Avni - sorry mamma....par please mat banata

Neela - thik hai nehi bataungi

                    
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     Neil came back to Meheta mansion. Everyone is present in hall. Avni was wearing a full sleeve top so her wound was covered. Avni saw him and runs to him and hugged him tightly.

Avni - I was waiting for you ( Neil smiled )

   Neil picked up her and sat with her on couch.

Avni - Neelu, I have a surprise for you

Neil - achha...aur kya hai wo surprise

Avni - first close you eyes

Neil - ok

    Neil closed his eyes. Avni took the pikoda plate and opened it's lid.

Avni - now open your eyes

   Neil opened his eyes and made a confused face seeing pokada

Avni - Neelu yeh maine banaya hai tumhare liye

Neil got surprised

Neil - what....but why

Avni - I want to make you happy

Neil - baby you don't need to do anything  to make me happy.... I'm happy with you......you are my happiness

   Avni smiled and hugged him

Avni - I love you Neelu

Neil - I love too baby ( kissing her hairs )

    All are admiring their love

Avni - kya tum yeh nehi khaoge ( she said braking hug )

Neil - ase kese nehi khaunga....meri baby ne itne pyar se apni pyari pyari haaton se meri liye banaya hai...yeh toh sirf main hi khaunga ( Avni smiles widely )

Avni - main apne haaton se khilaunga

    Avni took a pakoda and fed him. After chewing it 2-3 times Neil feels like his mouth is burning.

Avni - how it is ?

Neil - it.. it's very tasty baby....I love it

Avni made something for the first time that for Neil, so he don't want to make her upset, that's why he lied.

Avni - really ( he nods ).....mujhe bhi khani hai

Neil - nooo....( He shouted )

Avni - kya hua

Neil - baby, it's mine only....you can't eat this

     Neil ate the full plate of pokoda coughing but without water. Ashish was completely shocked. He thought Neil wouldn't eat it after one bite and will shouts on Avni but he didn't.

Avni - Neelu sambhal ke...yeh lo pani pilo

   Neil drank the whole glass in one go but it's still burning like hell.

Neil - baby mujhe kuch ek call karna hai main abhi aaya ( Avni nods )

   Neil went to Avni's room

Riya - lagta hai Neil ko Avni ke haat ke pokode kuch zyada hi achhe lage sara kha gaya...hamare liye ek bhi nehi chhoda ( everyone giggles )

Neela - are kitchen main aur hai main leke aati hun

Ashish - are Neela rehne do na abhi man nehi hai

Neela - are aapke toh favourite hai phir aap kese mana kar rehe ho

DW - use nehi khana toh na khaye meri gudia ne peheli baar kuch banaya hai main toh zaroor khaungi

Neela - ji main leke aati hun

    Rohit came there and takes blessing of Ashish and DW.

    Neela came with 2 plates of pakora

Rohit - are waah mujhe pokode bahut pasand hai

Neela - Avni ne banaya hai Neil ke liye

   Rohit got angry but didn't say anything.

Rohit - Avni ne banaya hai toh achha hi hoga

    Rohit ate a pokoda and then starts shouting

Rohit - ahh... yeh khya banaya hai Avni...itna mirchi kon dalta hai...banana nehi aata toh banaya kyun...ahhh...pani pani

Avni - par mere Neelu ko toh achha laga...tum jhoot bol rehe ho

Rohit - khud khake dekh lo

   Ashish glared at him

Ashish in mind - isse achha toh Neil hai chup chap khaliye taki Avni ko kuch pata na chale par yeh toh meri par chilla raha hai

Ashish - princess you don't need to eat this...aur Rohit agar pokode thode spicy hai toh kya ho gaya... tumhari himmat kese hua meri priencess pe chillane ki han

Rohit - uncle yeh thoda nehi bahut spicy hai... Koi ise nehi khaa sakta

    Avni ate a pakoda to know the truth and she started coughing.

Avni - ahh...pani ....mamma pani

    Neela gives her a glass and she drank it in one go. She thinks about Neil how he didn't want her to eat this

Avni - pata nehi mere Neelu ne kesa hoga

   She runs to her room and found him coughing very badly. His eyes were red and watery.

Avni - Neelu

     Neil turned to other side to compose herself but Avni turns him and smashed her lips on him. Avni feels his lips were warm. She slowly moves her lips. Neil holds her waist tightly and started responding to her kiss. Her soft plumpy lips made him to forget his pain.

       Neil broke the kiss hearing her sobs.

Neil - baby kya hua

Avni - I'm sorry Neelu ( sobbing )

    Avni hugged him tightly

Neil - shhh... baby it's ok...hojata hai asa.... it's not your fault

Avni - no it's my fault only...I shouldn't cook if I don't know

Neil - baby bas thoda mirchi zyada hogaya tha aur asa ho jata hai...yeh tumhara first time tha na... it's ok.. now stop crying ( wiping her tears )

Neil carried her to the bad and sits her on his lap.

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