The Orb of Time REWRITTEN ch. 1 pt. 1
I decided to rewrite my first story on Wattpad. Most of the rewriting will be about making the story more detailed and descriptive. If you wanna see the difference, you can check out the actual book.
Once upon a time, in a world where ghosts, both good and evil existed, there was an ordinary man with not much money and little self-confidence. That man was me, and I had just just awakened on a regular (maybe not) Friday morning when I heard an eerie sound.
"OOooOoOOO..." said a whispery voice.
My voice trembled, "Wh-who is that?"
A small, sad-looking ghost appeared. It took me a while to recognize the shape of the strange figure in front of me since it camoflagued with the blank, white walls inside my room.
"I am George the ghost of the future, Do not worry, I will not hurt you. I need you to go on a mission for me," the ghost said.
"B-but, what do you mean? Who are you? What do you need help with? Why are you here? A-am I dreaming?" I replied, trying to sound brave. Was I gonna die? Why else would a ghost be here? Did I need to learn a lesson? Was I too flawed?
"W-woah woah, calm down," said the ghost, now sounding like the one being freaked out.
"What's happening? Wh-what are you doing in my house? Uh, I mean- my room? Why is a ghost in my room?" I went on asking.
"Don't worry, you'll be fine. You're not gonna die, I swear."
"Then why are you here?" I asked the ghost.
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