A Wattpad Read: Review of "Enhanced and Broken" by A.X.
This story was little cliche-ish at the beginning for me, but it quickly spun into something that's engaging and that holds good potential to become original.
When wars and pollution come close to destroying the earth, scientists put their heads together to create a generation that won't be as effected (or not effected at all) by the poisonus environment so that they can clean and restore the ecosystem. Will they succeed in cleaning their home, or will they ultimately fail?
Yippie! It isn't a rated mature book! 10+ points from me right away!
Now- as I said earlier, it was a bit cliche-ish at the beginning. I thought it was going to be the same old-same old, "Oops, we stupid humans killed our planet again," sci-fi plot. But it's evolving into something much more different that what I thought it would be! A nod of approval to the author!
I don't remember seeing any swearing whatsoever during the time that I had read this! Another 5+ point bonus!
The grammar was excellent, rating it a 8 out of 10 stars. There might have been a few mistakes that I've glossed over or forgotten. If I did happen to forget a few mistakes, I'd say that's a good sign for the story.
Enhanced and Broken had realism that I'm constantly looking for, which adds to the character relatability. I wasn't really able to get invested as I would like to, though. The chapters were a little too short in my eyes- and I feel like that effected some of the flow of the story, character development, and some of the attachment that the reader will naturally feel for the protagonists as we spend more time getting to know and understand their goals and feelings on things. And don't worry- I get it that writer's block can be a pain in the tuchas and can slow you down. I should know... I had one of the worst cases of writer's block I've ever had during NaNoWriMo.
But I would totally reccommend this story! Go take a look, and develop your own opinions of the novel!
Side Note: Tuchas is the crude word for butt in Yiddish.
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