A Wattpad Read: Review of "diamonds | river phoenix" by jxdeeee

   This is a really cute story that's a fun time filler!

   When 21 year old Sidney Parkes gets a wedding invitation from her old friend from her home state California, she goes back to find a love that's truly extraordinary.

    When I read this, my first impression was that it felt like a modern fast-paced fairy tale for adults. But... perhaps a little too fast for me. I'm sorta left with the feeling of the author just breezing through the story just to get to the next thing on their "to-do" list.

   I'd give it a seven out of ten stars when it comes to grammar, which is pretty good considering some of the stories that you bump into on Wattpad don't even bother to put periods where they're needed. It could be a bit more bothersome if you're a super OCD type, like I sometimes am. 

  Once again, I didn't really notice any in-your-face cussing when I was reading this, if there was any at all. That automatically gives you 5+ points in my book!

  And the kissy-kissy action. You really can't have a story without kissing nowadays, can you? *chuckles* Even though this couple does kiss, it's only really been nose/forehead smooching that I would be tempted to rate PG; maybe a teetering grade in between PG and PG-13.

  My Overall Opinion:  This story doesn't really standout in a rememberable way to me, but it's certainly enjoyable. I think diamonds | river pheonix  would hold a lot more appeal to an audience that doesn't have my particular taste in tales. Just be sure to check it out for yourself!




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