Hey so you know how I said was gonna do a graphic novel? Well today I made a little comic, and I want some feedback if you can give it.

It's not very pretty, it was just for practice mostly. Final art in the comic should look much better. 

So before I just had the whole page but this is focusing on the part where they're talking. The main problem is that my camera sucks. I'm wondering if I can borrow one of my family member's device with a better camera and send it to my iPad, or scan it into the computer, but to be honest I don't really know how to work computers or scanners of whatever. But I want you to be able to see the image and the words so the comic is at peak enjoyableness. I don't know how many people will actually read it, but for the possible few I want them to be able to enjoy a quality comic and not have to squint through my horrible camera.

So I thought about taking pictures of the individual panels, and you can see the picutres better but I'm not sure how good that would work out when it comes to scenes and stuff

Another problem is my horrible handwriting. I'm thinking I might just leave the bubbles blank and type the words in.

If you have any sort of suggestions or feedback or whatever I'd love to hear it! Thanks!