Disclaimer: I don't mean to come off as rude in this chapter and I certainly don't want to be the person who tells you what you can and can't do. There are no rules in art, draw however you like. These are just things I personally don't like.

Aka I complain about stuff for way too long
So I guess I can't complain like a normal person because instead of just saying what I hate about some art I had to replicate it
Bright colour warning! (Eye strain)

This is all my art pet peeves combined into one drawing.
Anyways, here's the list of things that I think suck about this drawing!
-scratchy lineart. It looks really sketchy and inconsistent.
-neon colours. They hurt to look at. (At least for me)
-colour pallets that don't make sense. It's as if I went on a random colour generator to find the pallet.
-patterns that have no rhyme or reason. It's not as appealing as a more sensical pattern.
-eyes that are waaay more detailed than the rest of the character. It looks odd and imbalanced.
-tears that look like gelatin instead of liquid.
-blood that is neon red. It may work in other art styles, but it doesn't in mine.
-shading using pure black and white. Grey shading on a colourful character also bothers me.
-inconsistent light sources.
-airbrush shading. Some people like it, but I don't. (It can look good sometimes, but mostly I find it ugly)
-backgrounds that are the same colour as the character. The character doesn't stand out as much then.

Thank you for tuning in to this episode of inkwell acts like she knows how to draw by telling people what she doesn't like to draw instead of being a positive person and saying what she does like to draw!! It's been a real treat! G'night and drive safe