Hello Everyone. To start off this is a rough draft of a sort of image/comic I'm trying to draw. But I just ran into a speed bumb and I also need to ask a question.

First here is the rough draft.

So what I wanted to ask was do you all want Ketsu in it. My character will be in the picture and to clerefy this takes place in a mall I just need peoples opinion on how I can make this better or what some people want 2 see. To clarify there is no color with this because the eyes are too small to where I'm nervous I could screw it up.

So opinions and I will continue drawing this.
Assassin out