Well, I think I'm finished. I messed up SO bad in some parts, I'm debating whether I should redo the whole thing or not... Anyway, what do you guys think about it (be brutally honest).
Also, thank you ALL for commenting and giving me ideas! Although I probably failed them all, I think they made this piece way better than it would have been :)

So, the main part I messed up on was the road that leads upwards. It kinda looks like it's actually standing up, right? Or does it not? My sister suggested that I cover it up by making it a tree, but it's probably just going to look really discolored,  etc. I'm not sure though :/