That Quirky Love Story
Author: Amyltary

Here comes my insights about your story. 🐱🐱

Plot - Literally masyado nang common itong plot mo. But definitely the scenario is quite new to me. Nakakaenggangyong basahin yong plot. It makes me curious. I'm really amaze of your idea in this plot of yours. I praise you for that. I really love to read it again once you completed it.

Emotions of your Characters - You're amazing in doing this. I really feel the emotions of your characters and I really love it. It goes deep within my heart it really leaves a scar there. I still feel the sadness of Faith and I pity here. So there's no problem in here.

Blurb - I really love your blurb. But usually the blurb must be putted in the description of your book. Kaso sayo nailagay mo siya sa unang parte ng libro mo kung saan usually nilalagay yong prologue or synopsis.

Descriptive Words - Another amazing thing you have done to your story. You put so many descriptive words which I really love about your story that's why I'm happy while reading it.

Setting - The setting is okay I can't say anymore words cause there's no really problem about this.

Technicalities - Of course we can't avoid these thing but don't worry. Hindi naman masyadong marami 'yong technical errors mo kunti lang naman. You can still edit it after you complete the story.

I give you 98.2/100%

So this is the end of my insights about your story.

Suggestion - Ayusin mo yong tono ni Frat. He doesn't look manly to me especially in chapter 1. I thought at first he's a gay. But remember this is just my opinion as your reader it is still up to you to change anything.

My advice - Continue writing dear and enjoy every moment you have while writing. Don't think so much whether you have a reader or not. Just focus on writing cause that's what you like and readers are just a part of your journey. Happy day and enjoy.

I hope this critique of mine help you a lot. If you still want my insights about your story you can come back here anytime. ❤❤