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"Guyz.. i m not taking any revenge.. i m in love with nandini.. "he finally confess his love and they all look at him shockingly. They were not expecting this answer from him.

"Manik you are in love.. really stop making us fool okay"cabir said while from manik face smile is not going.

"Cabir this is the truth that i am in love.. her smile her face her soul her everything is so beautiful she is so beautiful from outside and from inside too.. "manik said making them more shock. As they never seen their monster friend smiling and talking about love like this.

"Manik wao.. that's amazing u r in love.. "mukti said hugging manik finally believing on him.

"Look look.. guyz how he is smiling.. "alia said while everybody laugh on him. While manik is just smiling now also as he is smiling from his heart today.

" vese i m happy that now my friends has also understood my angel.. "manik said calling nandini as his angel . While all of them get aww.. on him.

"Aww.. angel and all so much love"Alia said while​ now manik nodded his head.

"Vese achanak line par kese agye mere sare monster friend.. "manik ask and now they all look at each other sadly.

"Bsh manik hum samjh gye hai.. insulting someone is not good.. we were hurting her so much Today we understand this. We will apologize her . Now  toh she is our babhi.. ji"mukti said while manik is looking at them as like he has got impressed with them.

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"If today that manger didn't insulted us..  toh hum shyd samjh hi nhi pate ki how much it's hurt when someone insult you.. kitna dard hota hai.. humhne nandini ko bhut pain diya hai guyz.."mukti said sadly now fab 4  are at cabir's house. So this is reason that they have got changed so much. And start understanding the other feelings and pain.

"We will apologize from her.. guyz jo bhi karna padhe hum karenge.. now She is our responsibility  "cabir said all nodded getting agree with his words.

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Night time

Manik P.O.V.

Dam i want to see her smile again. I want her back in front of my  eyes. What magic u have done on monster like me. I m smiling like a fool all the time thinking about you.

"Tere pyaar ne kiya hai yeh kesa jadu.. , aaj tak kabhi yeh insan muskurya nhi aur aaj yeh muskurye nhi ruk  rha hai.. "i said shayri.. "vha vha kya bat hai manik well done. Keep it up. "I praise myself..

But what should I do ?  i want to see her smile now then only i will get relief..

Manik P.O.V.  End

"Nandini i don't know what is your pain.. but ek promise karta hn mein tumhse.. tumhra dard jo bhi hoga.. tabh bhi mein tumhai kabhi nhi chodhunga.. agr yeh raste agal bhi hogye.. mein phir bhi tum ko tumko chaunga.. "his words are echoing in her ear again and again and she is also smiling from her heart. She is sitting at window looking at moon having a smile on her face. His love has made her forget  her pain so easily. This is the magic of love. This is power love. No pain can stand against the power of true love.

Manik P.O.V.

Finally i stopped my car in front of nandini's flat. My heart is beating so fastly like always. Jab bhi voh mere kareeb hoti hai iss dil ko phle hi asaas ho jata hai.. may be because we are connected by heart.

Then i come out of my car and my eyes falls on her. After seeing her my breath get stuck in my throat. My mind and heart stop working as She is smiling looking at moon. In moon light she is looking more then beautiful. God has made her so beautiful for me only i know.

Then she look at me from 1st floor she is making herself believe that i m real. And then i wave my hand and she then shockingly get up after realizing that i m real and i m still waving my hand like a fool. She then got disappeared making me worried for her. Then only my phone start ringing. I ignore it looking at window making sad face. I wanna meet her then only she again come back on window and i see she is holding the phone near to her ear. Then i immediately realize that she is the one who is calling me. Then i immediately pick up the my phone. Duffer me

"Manik what are u doing here voh bhi itne rat mein.. mom ne dekh liya toh voh kya sochengi "as soon as i pick up the phone . She start asking me so many question looking at me.

"Nandini i come here just to see your smile.. "i suddenly said n she look at me shockingly for a movement and then give me a huge smile. Oh god so beautiful . Her smile is so precious for me.

"Thank u.. "i said smiling back and now she is just looking at me. "Now i wanna hug you.."i said and again she look at me shockingly. "But how manik.. tum vha aur mein yha.."she said confusingly. Her words are clearly showing that she also want hug. Wao..

"Manik ke raj mein sab possible hai just wait and watch my angel.."i said n she look at me confusingly .

"Manik what are u doing u will fall down.. "she said worriedly looking at me as i start climbing upward through pipe. She  freaks out seeing me. But today no power can stop me from meeting my angel. I finally reach upto her window and she immediately pull me inside.

Wao.. finally i get what i was waiting for. As she hug me tightly holding my shirt. and i also hug her back . Wao i find so peace in her arms. I want to hide her in my arms forever and ever. After a movement we break the hug and look deeply into each other eyes.

"R u mad manik gir jate toh.. mere kya hota "she said and look down while blushing. Wao she is dam cute. She cares for me alot. Today incident has proved this.

"Wao my angel is blushing amazing ek din mein itne sare surprises.. "i said and she look at me having a smile on her face.

"U come here to meet really.. itna pyaar kab hua mujhse.."she ask now confusingly looking at me.

"Jab mere dil ne tumhai pechan liya ki tum hi ho meri angel.. my soulmate from that day only u have started living in my heart.. bsh ab iss dil ko tumhri hi jarurat hai.. tumhai dekha bina ek pal nhi rha jata.."i said each and every word from my heart and she is just looking at me and her eyes again start becoming teary. Oh dam i made her cry.

"No no.. not today no tear no painful talks aaj hongi sirf pyaar se bhari meethi bate.. "i said she immediately move her eyelashes to remove her tear.

"Manik thank u so much for coming in my life.. yeh dil bhut kush hai.. aaj sirf aur sirf tumhre karan.. iss dil ko humsha se sirf tumhri hi talaash thi.. "she said now putting my hand on her heart. And make me listen her heartbeat. "Aankhen khule toh main dekhun tujhe , Sirf yeh hi farmaish hai , Pehli toh mujhko yaad nahi Tu meri aakhiri khwahish hai"nandini in different way confess her love and her confession take away my heart. I find her word so pure. The way she said these words looking into my eyes deeply.

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Now we are sitting at window. She is sitting in front of me and sharing her childhood memories with me. Her childhood was so beautiful. She was so naughty but what had happened to her that she started living a life like a deadbody.

"U know manik every day mommy ko school se call ata tha.. aaj nandini ne iss teacher ke sath yeh kiya.. aaj usko maara aaj usko pita.. it was so much fun.. hahah.."she said and start laughing after this.. wao.. so beautiful . The way she is laughing amazing. I want that she keep on laughing and i keep on admiring her. I can admire till infinity.

"Manik.. i have to show you something.. "she said suddenly getting up and i just nod my head giving her smile. Then she start going toward her cupboard.

"Aaahha.. "she scream holding her leg and i immediately run toward her. Suddenly what has happened to her. Oh god.

"Angel r u fine.. let me see"i said  while bending down in front of her and try to hold her feet  but she move backward. She is wearing shocks as like always fully covered. I don't having any problem but i wanna know yaar..

"Manik it's okay bsh choti si chut lag gye thi.. i m fine.. "she said making me get up holding my shoulder. I doesn't force her more as i don't want to make her feel uncomfortable. I know one day she will herself share her pain with me.

Then she take out something from her cupboard n start coming toward me having a smile on her face. She having transparent jars in her hand n in that something is shinning.. i don't know what is this but these are really beautiful.

"Manik these are fireflies.. my grandmother told me that when there is love they glow "nandini said looking at jar having so much happiness in her eyes. She is admiring the fireflies and i m admiring her. Her words are saying that she also loves me.. but when she will confess.

"Nandini they are amazing.. so beautiful what your grand mother told me.. i think it is right.. i love you and they are glowing.."i said and while she just give me a big smile. She about to say something but before that we listen knock on door.

"Nandini beta open the door.." we both then listen voice of nandini's mother. And she become worried.

"Manik.. kya karu agr mommy ne dekh liya itni rat ko tumko yha toh voh kya sochengi.. manik jadli hide somewhere"she said worriedly and then run toward her cupboard and open it. And make me sit inside the cupboard and immediately close the cupboard

"Bacha.. r u fine.. open the door"then again i listen aunty's voice then only i hear door opening sound.

Manik P.O.V. ends

"Nandini tu thik hai.. "priya ask worriedly cubbing nandini face while nandini is pretending that she has just waked up from sleep.

"Mommy.. i was sleeping itni rat ko aap yha"nandini said while rubbing her eyes.

"I heard your scream.. "priya said making nandini so overwhelmed . She just had screamed in her room and from other room priya listened her scream. She always think that how her mother feels her pain always.

"Mommy i am fine.. don't worry "nandini said while hugging her mother. Then priya leave from there giving her smile. Nandini close the door. And open the cupboard.

Manik's P.O.V.

She then open the cupboard and i get back my breath  as it was getting so difficult to breath in cupboard. I immediately come out while breathing heavily but i find her lost. Now what has happened to her again.

"Nandini.. marne ka irada tha kya mujhe.. pata i was not able to breath also.. "i said to divert her mind.

"Sorry i didn't found anything else so made u hide there.."she said looking at me having guilt in her eyes. Such a innocent soul she is.

"I was just kidding nandini.. it's okay "i said cubbing her face and she just give me light smile . "Now come i will make u sleep.. "i said holding her hand and she now give me a big smile."I don't wanna sleep i want to share many more thinks.."she said like kid and i nod my head.

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She has now slept while sharing her  many more incident about her childhood. She is sleeping putting her head on my shoulder. We are sitting at window only. I picked her up in my arms carefully and make her ly down on bed. Her scarfs , shocks and hand gloves attract me again. I want to see that what is behind them. I move my hand toward her scarf as i can't lose this chance. Today i will get my all answers.

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