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Audience were going mad for Fab 5. They were waiting for their one and only rockstar. They were hooting his name. They were going crazy for him.  There were lots of fan of manik Malhotra but he was fan of one girl who is his angel.

Then only spotlight came on manik who was standing having guitar in his hand . His eyes were closed. Everyone became Silent and he started tunning his guitar. Then again audience started hooting his name. No one was aware that the person who was standing in front of them , he was in so much pain . He was just physical presented there but his mind was in his own world. The world where he was with his angel.

Listen the song while reading the part.. i really love the lyrics of this song..❤

(As it Something you do
I'm so lost without you
Baby, I miss you
So, don't go!)

Then audience heard mukti's voice. Manik immediately opening his eyes looked toward mukti but he imagined mukti as his angel. He thought that nandini was singing for him.

(Even though it still hurt
Last time make it work
Baby, I miss you
So, don't go)

Then he imagined that nandini was singing while coming  toward him and he was just looking at her having pain in his eyes. His heart was shouting that he need her. Now it's his turn to sing . Abhi noticed that he was lost. He putted his hand on his shoulder and manik came back to reality and he saw mukti was singing  far away from him.

(Jo tujhse chhoote
Raste bhi roothe
Manzil hui laapata
Hanste hain jhoothe
Andar se toote
Shiqve sabhi de mita)

Now finally he started singing looking at audience having blackness in his eyes. He started taking  his all feeling out by  this song. His song was clearly depicting that how much lonely and broken he is.

(Toh aao na chalein phir se
Sataao na mujhe phir se
Main tanha hoon bina tere
Bulaao na mujhe phir se)

Now he sang little bit louder while holding the mike tightly and now his eyes started finding his angel in thousands of people. Everyone were going crazy after listing his this intense song. His song was clearly showing that how badly he wanted her back in his life.

(Kabhi haq toh jataao na
Hoon kya main ye bataao na
Tumhari aankhon se duniya
Mujhe aakar dikhao na)

He sang while taking out all his feeling out. He was saying to her by this song that "he wanted see this world from her eyes and he wanted to know what he is for her ? He wanted her back in his love." How much he was craving for his love . His song was clearly showing this.

(As it something you do
I'm so lost without you
Baby, I miss you
So, don't go
Even though it still hurts
Last time, make it work
Baby, I miss you
So, don't go!)

Now it's turn of mukti to sing but she was not in a condition to sing. She was feeling like crying seeing manik's condition. Alia after noticing this she immediately took mike from mukti's hand and she started singing instead of mukti. That's what friend do in need , alia did that.

(Kaise kahun, kaise sahun
Kaise jiyun tu bata...
Tere sang hi toh rehti hai
Meri saari khushiyaan...
Tere mere lamhe adhure se hai wahaan
Humko bulane laga phir wahi raasta)

Now manik sang coming more close to audience and his eyes were still finding her. He could felt that she was here only. He knew that she was presented in this crowd. His heart was saying him. And he was singing like mad person as he was taking out his real feeling by his song. Now he was asking from her " how can he Live without her ? How can he bear to live without her as his all happiness with her only.  Their movements are still incomplete they have to complete them "

(Oh I don't really know
What I'm gonna do
Do you see a ray of hope
See it for me too
I miss you come back to me)

Now again Alia sang coming close to edge of stage while manik saw nandini instead of Alia and he felt that his nandini was calling him. He felt sad and now it's became very difficult for him to control his tears. He wanna cried his out loud but he can't.

(Ummeedein phir se jagaao na)

He sang a line and stopped in middle as finally his eyes found nandini. From the thousands of people he found his angel. This what is called true love.

Audience and fab 4 became shocked and manik was just looking at her. Audience again started hooting his name and manik immediately jumped from stage making Fab 4 worried for him. They also came downstair  and cabir asked from security guards to handle the public.

(Aa.. aaaa...)

He started running toward audience and audience trying to touch him  and some people were taking his pictures while security guards were pushing the audience away. Before manik go in b/w the public , cabir and abhi held him from back as it was not right for him to go in b/w his fan. They all will jump on him as they were going crazy  for him. Manik also knew that but at this time he just didn't wanted to lost his angel.

"Let me go or else i will lost her.. "he cried while trying to came out from cabir and abhi arms. Mukti and Alia were looking at him worriedly. They were feeling so bad for him.

"Manik nandini is not here , be relax and come with us we promise you we will find nandini"cabir tried to explain him but he was not in a condition to listen anybody. He pushing both of them away ran toward exist.

"Manik.."mukti shouted and they all ran behind him.

(Mitne laga hai saari hasraton ka dhuaan and
Aata hi kahaan hai laut kar waqt bita huaa
Thaa woh saaya aur saaya kab kisi ka huaa)

He came out and looked around and started running here and there madly on road to find his angel. And finally he saw her standing on bridge. He smile seeing her and started running toward bridge having smile on his face. He knew that this time she was real not his imagination.

(Kehti hai zindagi mujhe
Ab tu phir laut aa
Chale thhe hum kisey paane
Aur aa thehre kahan jaane
Khadi hai saamne khushiyan
Toh phir kyun dil nahi maane)

Before he could reached toward her. Few of his fans came in front of him and started asking for selfies. He became mad and pushed them away and he saw that now nandini was not standing on bridge.

(Milega woh nahi aage
Kahaan dil bewajah bhaage
Abhi bhi waqt hai yaara
Jiyein phir se...)

He came running toward bridge and he started crying badly while holding railing. His condition was becoming worst day by day. He wanted to jump down from the bridge right now but he knew that nandini was waiting for him .  He can't even die also he was so helpless.

(As it something you do
I'm so lost without you
Baby I miss you so don't go)

Then he again imagined nandini who was  singing standing beside him. He looked at her like a baby who need help.  He wanted her to repiar his broken heart. He wanted her for everything as she was the only reason of his happiness. She was the only one who brought color in his black and white world.

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"Manik.. oh god where were you thank god u come back"mukti said having so much concern for him in her voice   as soon as he entered inside their room. Then she hugged manik . Fab 4 got their breath back seeing him fine. They had became so much worried for him when he had left .

"I lost her again.. she again left me.. seeing me in this condition also she left me"he said in breaking voice and all looked at him having tears in their eyes. He was shocked to believe that how could she left him after knowing that he was dying without her.

"Manik please relax your mind first.. don't worry we will find her with you.. manik bsh tu apne aapko sambhal we are with you.. we will make everything fine"cabir said putting hand on his shoulder like a true friend and all nodded their head positively.

"There is No need to find her.. after seeing my condition also she left me.. she doesn't love me.. "he said like a mad person and fab 4 looked at each other sadly. Then he started breaking the things while saying" she doesn't love me"

"Aahha..  i can't live without her why she is not understanding i love her so much.. "he started crying after collapsing down on floor and screamed his heart aloud. All having tear in their seeing him.

"Manik.. "alia said while putting  her hand on his shoulder after sitting in front of him.  " Plz alia give me my angel dedo mujhe meri angel vapis"He cried like a baby looking at alia and begged from her to give his angel while opening his hand in front of her. Alia also started crying loudly while hugging manik.

Mukti was crying hugging abhi and cabir was crying while palming his mouth. They were feeling so helpless  that they can't able to help his friend. It was becoming very painful for them seeing manik in this condition.

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Somebody was pressing the bell of house again and again and knocking the door also. This was clearly showing that the person was in hurry.

Suddenly the door got opened by a girl and the person immediately ran inside. And now we can see the person was non other then nandini. She was same her body was fully covered like before.

"What happened nandini u are not looking fine.. is everything alright?"the girl asked worriedly while nandini sat on couch holding his head.

"He has seen me navya.. Now he will surely find me i have to run from here"nandini said while looking at navya worriedly as like she was scared of something.

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Manik was lying on bed and staring at ceiling he was lost in his beautiful memories with nandini. Now this was the only which was keeping alive. Then only his phone beeped up and he immediately took the phone from side table. A smile came on his face after reading the message .

As in the message he read the address of navya and Katrina. He immediately got up from bed  " i m coming angel.. to  get you back forever and ever in my life.. now no more running.. " he said having determination in his eyes.

Question Time

1. How do u find this part ?

2. How do find the song sequence ?

3. So nandini was real , now what do think manik will find nandini or not ?

4. What do u think why nandini is running away from manik ?

5. How was the scene of manik with friends?

Guyz.. there are so many shocks are stored in this story.. and guyz plz be patient i will reveal about nandini pain as according to story.. i don't wanted to spoil the story revealing about nandini pain. So u have to wait guyz and enjoy the story.. 

Love Mehak