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"One day i was walking on road I was so lost.. 1 year of mental torture as that animal was beating my mom daily and I wasn't able to do anything.. I just wanted to kill myself as i couldn't able to save my mom from that monster. That day I got hit by someone's car. A lady took me to her home.. and that lady was so sweet she asked me about my pain. She promised me to help me.. so i shared my pain with her and she fulfilled her promise , she printed my real life story in newspaper and spread it in the media and then that animal got arrested and i saved my mother.. that lady came in my life like a god. "Manik completed his story and Nandini hugged him tightly to assure him that she is with him. She is speechless to say anything so that's why she just hugged him. She is not crying as she promised him that she will be strong and she is perfect in hiding her tears.

"U know what she told me.. she told me that the weak person never rules the world.. if u want to rule the world u have to be strong and become a monster.. "manik said these word and nandini immediately break the hug and give him shocking look as she know the person who said these words, as one day that person said these words to her also.

"Manik who was the lady.. "she ask from him to confirm her doubt.

"Your mom Priya kapoor.. "manik said clearing her doubt and nandini felt so blessed to be the daughter of such a great women.

"But u know nandini i took her advice in wrong way I became like that animal a monster.. i even hurted you... i m sorry.. "he again apologises for his mistake holding her hand while nandini nodded her head in no.

"No manik i understand you.. don't be sorry.. mom took u out from the pain and became your god and you took me out from my pain and became my god.. "she said having so much love for him in her eyes.

"Manik how is nyonika aunty now.. "she asked about nyonika as listening his past she felt bad for manik's mom as she suffered alot.

"Nandini.. she is just living for me.. she has broken completely.. the pain she had gone through she can't forget.. mom tried to escape also.. but that animal having contact with A.C.P. and commissioners also.. so mom had no option left rather than bearing the torture.. "Manik said sadly looking down.

"Manik u r with her na she will be fine.. just always try to give her happiness.. i want to meet her.. "nandini try to explain him while holding his hand.

"Nandini mom also want to meet you voh jana chati hai ki kis ladhki.. ne mujh par jadu kar diya hai ki mere chahre se smile hi nhi jati.."manik said and nandini also smile listening these words.

"Nandini don't u want to know how I realize that i love you keeping my monster side at side.."manik ask and she nod her head positively​ as she wanted to know.

"Your mom only.. when i expelled you from college your mom came at my home.. "manik started telling the story

Flashback

"Aap.. "manik get shock to see priya , his god in front of his eyes . He wanna meet his god again and wanna thank her properly and now his wish has fulfilled .

Manik immediately sit in front of priya and touched her feet. Priya get shocked to see his gesture as she doesn't know who is manik.

"Do u remember a 8 year boy whom you helped from his monster dad.. "manik ask now looking at priya still sitting on floor. Priya nodded her head.

"That boy was me.. I was finding you.. I wanna thank you.. u r my god.. u took me out of pain.. "manik said now holding her hand but priya jerked his hand making manik shocked.

"Lekin kya fayda hua.. ban toh tum apne bap ki tarha hi gye.. meri beti ko expell karwa diya without any reason.. what was my daughter's mistake.. "priya shout angrily on manik moving back while manik look down in guilt.

"My god only taught me that a weak person can't rule the world we should be strong , sometime monster.. so I become monster.. i want to know your daughter pain.. i don't know why her pain is effecting me.. "manik said his inner feeling to her.. without hesitating as he put priya on his god place. As like we share everything with god same manik is doing.

"Manik i told u that sometime.. we have to become monster.. aaj tum itne samjdar hogye ho.. shyd u will understand my these words also that sometime love can be solution of problem.. pyaar se bhi sab thik kara ja skta hai.. and if she was effecting you that's mean u r in love with my daughter.. manik i can understand u was a kid when all this happened with you.. now it's high time try to understand my words.. surely one day u will succeed.. "priya said now putting her hand on his head and gave him courage and made him understand​ like a mother.

"What is her pain.. plz tell me.. " he asked immediately as this question is killing him and priya give him a faint smile.

"Manik I can't tell you , u have to work hard.. to know her pain , manik i wanna say only this and ek bar meri bato par gor jarur krna.."priya after saying this started leaving while manik ask "can i call u mom.. " and she turn and just give him smile may be a approval .

Flashback over

"Nandini your mom is truly my god she helped me every time.. when ever i lost my path she came like a god and help me out.. and you are also like your mom an angel.."manik said while nandini is feeling so blessed to be a daughter of priya.

"Manik really u were acting like a monster, only to know my pain.. manik plz understand me I don't want to leave you soon by sharing my pain.. i don't want to give you pain plz understand me.."she said breaking his all hopes . He thought that if he will share his past with her may be she will also open up with him after this but still she thinks the same. Why will he leave her after knowing her pain ?

"Angel.. it's okay baba.. now i m not asking anything so don't be sad.. and u promised me that u will help me to change my worst memories of this tree house to beautiful memories.. u forgot.. " manik said to change the topic. And she now start coming close to his face.

"I love you manik.. but manik we can't be always together.. don't come so close to me.. that after that it will become difficult for us to live without each other "nandini said these word coming close to manik face while cupping his face. And manik become so confused after listening her words. But he is happy that she finally confessed her love.

But next movement he touch his lips with her and then she herself suck his upper lips and he suck her lower lips after that they start kissing each other smoothly and lovingly. Their kiss is only filled with love, no lust only love which they have for each other. Their kiss is so pure as their love. Manik through this kiss he is saying that he will never let her go away from him. After 5 min. also both are not ready to break the kiss. For both of them this is a new feeling and they are feeling happy from inside. Their inner soul is also getting satisfy.

After that Manik about to remove her scarf in b/w the kiss. But nandini after breaking the kiss push him. Manik look at her shockingly.

"Manik i m sorry.. "she said coming toward him while manik put his finger on her lips before she could complete her sentence.

"It's okay angel i understand you.. don't need to be sorry , when u will feel comfortable then only we will proceed​.. i can understand"manik said and nandini look at manik having so much respect and love for him in her eyes.

"I am really glad that i have fallen in love with the person like you.. who understands the feelings of girls.. "nandini said while hugging him while manik hug her back and he smile listening this word from her mouth.

"Now it's time to create some beautiful memories here "nandini said after breaking the hug happily and manik also smile back. A smile comes automatically on his face after seeing her smile always.

Manik P.O.V.

"Let's play something.. "she said and i nodded​ my head positively and then i tied my handkerchief on her eyes and she started finding me. Like this for sometime we played so many games. Which she used to play in her childhood . I never played any game in my childhood.. i lost my childhood because of that animal. But today nandini gave me the feel of childhood after playing like a kid with me.

She is so sweet , innocent and childish like a baby.. god knows which pain took all her innocence but after listening to her words i am really scared to know about her pain as she said when i will get to know about her pain. She will leave me or either i will leave him. I can't live without even a second. Voh meri har ek saas mein hai.. how will I breath if she will leave me.

In evening we come to nandini's home and now the time comes​ when i have to say good bye to her. Um.. why can't she live with me. I want to marry her. So that she will remain each and very second with me .

"Bye manik.. "she said and start going toward her flat and i m looking at her only and keep standing there . Then she came on window after 5 min and she got shocked to see me.

"Manik.. go.. "she shout from window and i m just smiling like a fool looking at her and then she started doing something on phone and after that my phone beeped up.

"Manik we will meet tomorrow now go and take rest and spend time with your mom.. " i read her message still having smile on my face. And again bid bye and now she is smiling looking at me unbelievably. I want that her smile should never fade away.

Manik P.O.V. ends

Next morning

Manan were walking in the corridor holding each other hand having a smile on their faces. They both were thinking about their beautiful first kiss. That was their best moment.

"Ahaha.. "nandini shout in pain as a ball hit on her. back. Manik become so worried for her and he look angrily toward the person who hit her. And that person got scared seeing anger of manik.

"Nandini are u okay.. "manik ask worriedly holding her from shoulder while nandini give her smile.

"Manik i m fine.. "she said and try to act normal but her face expression are clearly showing that she is in so much pain.

"Nandini let me see.. "manik said and about to look at her back but nandini said while stopping him "manik i m fine.. "

Then he get terrified seeing the blood on floor . Then Manik immediately turn her and get shocked to see red spot on her white dress at back. It is blood he is sure.

"Nandini it's blood let's go to sick room "manik said worriedly holding her hand and her next act made him hell shocked.

"Manik.. i m saying na i m fine.. stay away from me.. "she shouted while pushing him putting her all her pressure and he fall down on floor. And she run from there immediately ignoring her all pain. While manik is shocked to react and all passing by people got shocked to see this scene.

Question Time

1. How was the part ?

2. So finally and officially the god of manik has been revealed.. few word for manik's god I mean priya ? Isn't u find priya really a god of manik ?

3. How do u find manan first kiss ?

4. Few words for manik the understanding lover ? Don't u think he is a boy , whom every girl wish for as their life partner?

5. Few word for the last scene ?

6. What do u think , Why nandini was trying to hide her pain ?

7. Now what will be manik reaction ?

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