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Now it's been a week passed away . Fab 4 treated nandini like their little sister. Nandini is now living happily. After that day they had never asked about her pain . Manik still is majnu.. they both share each and everything with each other. Now they can't leave  a second without each other. Manik want to share his past with her but he feel scared for her. After knowing his pain he will make her cry. Many times nandini ask about his childhood but manik always changed the topic . And he also thinks that if he will share his past with her may be she will also get courage to share her pain with him. So today he has decided to share his past with her. What was the reason which had made him a monster who even hurted nandini.

"Haha.. "mukti and nandini laugh loudly after seeing one funny video. And whole class stare at them and then they control their laugh by palming their mouth and  looks at each other.

"Show the video to me also na.."alia said coming toward them like a baby  has left to feed by her mother then mukti handover the phone to alia. After seeing the video alia also start laughing . Cabir and abhi look at them unbelievably.

"Yeh ladhkiyan bhi na bakwas si video dekh kar hasti rehti hai.."cabir said and abhi nod his  head. Then only manik enter in class room he smile seeing nandini.

"Nandini let's go i need to show u something.."manik said holding nandini's hand while she give him confuse look. "Where.. "she ask and without saying anything he start taking her out of college. Now what is going in majnu manik's mind ??🤔🤔

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Nandini attire (forget to show in starting updates and she wear gloves and shoes )

"Manik where do you taking me why are u not telling me.. is everything all right.. ?manik u r making me worried.. say something plz"nandini asking all this question while sitting in car beside him while he is driving the car and doesn't bother to give her answer . His full concentration is on road.

"Nandini , do u have  trust on me.. ? "he ask and nandini become quite now by listening to his sudden question and look at him confusingly.

"I have full trust on you manik more then i having trust on myself.. "she said and manik smile listening her word. He is happy that finally nandini start trusting him . Now that day is not so far when she will share her pain with him.

After something he stop the car in b/w the forest. Nandini look here there confusingly but now she doesn't ask anything as she having full trust on him. Manik give her smile and entwined his hand with her and after coming  close to her  face he kissed her forehead. This forehead kiss to assure her that he will never ever break her trust.

"I know.. "she said after listening to his unsaid words through this forehead kiss. Then both look deeply into each other eyes.

Then he start taking her inside the forest  holding her hand . Nandini is only looking at him as she know if some danger will come in front of her , manik is there to save her. This is showing how much she trust him.

Then he stop and by his eyes expression he ask her to look in front of her. And she turning her face look straight and she get amazed seeing the beautiful tree house in front of her eyes. Manik is just smiling looking at her. The tree is small and beautiful. Lighting is making it more beautiful.

Manik then pick her in his arm and start taking her upward. Nandini is just now looking into his eyes and he too but today she is finding some sadness in his eyes. She become confuse that why he is sad.

"Ahaha.. mumma.. "cry of small kid echoing in his ear and he close his eyes and take deep breath and give a smile to nandini. This made nandini more worried.

After reaching inside he put her down . She is just trying to figure out what is going in his mind by noticing at his each and every expression. There is Something serious related to this tree house she is dam sure about this.

"So how is my surprise do u like the tree house"he ask and now she look at the surrounding and find the interior of tree house more beautiful.

"Manik.. it's so beautiful but u r not looking fine what happened "she said cubbing his face and he look at her having sadness in his eyes.

"Nandini yes i m not fine after seeing this beautiful tree house.. because there are so many worst memories of mine are stored here..  whenever i comes here i don't find peace..but nandini i want to change it.. i want to love this beautiful place.. i want to forget my past.. i don't want that my past should  effect me more.. that's why i want to share my past with you.. i wanted to share my past with you from the very first day when i confessed my love  but u was so broken.. i didn't wanted to make u cry more  that's why i was waiting for the right time but today i want to end it.. "manik said his words  have made nandini hell confused and scared.

"Manik do you having bad past and Is your past related to this tree house ? Manik u r making me scared plz tell me everything.. "she said  putting her hand on his face.

"This all had started when i was 7 year.. old"manik said while looking at side of couch and imagine a boy is sitting on floor beside the couch holding his knees. Nandini is just noticing his each and every expression.

Flashback

We can see a kid in age of 7 crying in darkness. There is no light. The weather is cold. Wind is flowing fastly. The sound of wind is making the kid more scared. He was shivering badly in fear but no one is there to help him and take him out from the darkness.

"Mumma.. uhm.. bhut dar lag rha hai plz help me.. where are u.."he said in b/w his cry with his shivering lips.

Then he become more scared when he listen the sound of door opening and closing because of wind. He hugged his knees more tightly and cry more. But why there is no one who can help him. Who left the kid like this alone in b/w the forest. Why the kid is suffering here.

Flashback over

"Manik who had locked you up here and why.. how can someone leave a small kid in jungle.. "she ask in breaking voice n tear fall down from her eyes.

"Sh.. don't cry plz bhut muskil se i gather courage to share my past with you plz don't make me weak..  "he said while wiping her tear and she look at him having sympathy in her eyes for him.

"Manik i promise i will be strong.. I will remove your all pain.. "she said cubbing his face having so much love in her voice while manik kissed her hand having smile on his face. He is waiting for that day when she will give him chance to say these words for her which today she has said. But she is not ready to share her pain. He is hoping that may after he will share his pain. She will get courage to share her pain.

"Nandini my life was perfect till age of 7 but only for me as i was so small to understood  that monster was living in my house only.."manik said now having anger in his eyes while nandini hold his hand to assure him that she is with him.

Flashback

"Wao mumma deda..  this tree house is so beautiful "manik said happily while entering in the tree house. Nyonika and yash Malhotra are also enter inside following him . They smile looking at their happy kid. They came here to spend holiday.

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Manik is sleeping in his room. "Mumma.. "he waked up suddenly due to nightmare. He immediately run toward his parent's room. And he get a shock to see the scene which he has seen inside the room. He can't able to believe on his eyes.

As his father is slapping his mother nyonika again and again. He run inside the room as he can't see his mother in pain.

"Deda.. why are you beating mumma.. "he shout pulling his shirt. And Yash immediately stopped and he and nyonika get shock to see him .

"Manik u go out.. badho ki bato mein interfere nhi karte "Yash said to manik angrily. "No i will not go first u have to tell me why u was beating my mumma.." he said angrily.

"Nyonika said your kid to go out or else i will not leave him also.."yash said angrily looking at nyonika and she nod her head negatively.

"Manik baby plz go plz "nyonika ask to manik to go as she doesn't want yash will also beat him.

"No mumma i will not go.. "manik said and then only he get a tight slap from Yash and poor kid fall down on floor and nyonika about to run toward manik but yash hold her hand.

"Manik yes i was beating your mother.. she is my wife and i can do anything with her see.. "he said now slapping nyonika again while manik get more angry seeing this. " Manik , if u will come in b/w i will not leave you also "he warned manik but manik is so angry as he can't see his mother in pain.

"Plz yash plz don't do anything with manik he is kid.. "nyonika beg joining her hand in front of him for her kid.

"Leave my mumma.."manik said while bitting his hand  angrily and yash shouted in pain.

"Manik.. i m your father how dare you"yash said pushing manik on floor and start kicking on his stomach while manik is crying pain.

"Yash plz leave him don't beat my son.. plz.. chodh do mere bete ko.."nyonika start begging again holding his feet

"U bitch come with me.. if he will remain alone here 2 3 days na.. then only he will understand "yash said and came out of the house and start locking the door of tree house.

"Yash.. he is your son plz don't do this with him.. "nyonika said while yash  switch off the main power of house. And leave from there with nyonika.

Flashback over

"He was a animal. He beated my mom like a animal he left me that day in this house.. so that i should start listening him.. voh mujhe darana chate tha.. aur ush din se mein bhut jada dar gya.. because that two days in this house were very difficult for me.. i cried and cried  call mumma..  but no one came here to help me.. it was like a bad nightmare for me..  after that dad in front of my eyes started beating my mom  but i was so small to do anything.. his torture on my mom was increasing  And with  each passing day my anger  was increasing.. it was looking like that there would be no end of his torture but after a year i met my god.."he said now having smile on his face while nandini is numb to react after listening his story.

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Question time

1. How was the part ?

2. Few word for his past ?

3.  So manik's past has been reaveled what do you think now nandini will share her  pain  with him or not ?

4. Everyone knows that who is manik's god but what do u think how she had helped manik become his god

5. Few word that yash Malhotra? Guys there are so many people in this world who are like yash and nyoinka.

There will be manan separation in this story.. as this is story demand so plz.. don't comment don't separate manan. The story will be hell emotional but this will be not a dark story. There will be happy ending for sure.😊 The real story haven't started yet.

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