sorry for the wait but I focused to much on the other story's I forgot about this one. my writing style has gone better. things has changed to y/n, she will look different  the picture below is how she looks.

 hope you readers enjoy.

y/n pov

me, applejack and twilight decided to go to rarity for some help.

Applejack: Howdy, Rarity! 

Twilight Sparkle: Shh... Can't you see Rarity is trying to concentrate?

y/n: What do you think she's makin'?

Twilight Sparkle: Looks like a dress.

Applejack: Well, that makes sense. Since this is a dressmaker's shop and all.

Rarity: Is there something I can help you with?

Twilight Sparkle: Oh, so very sorry to trouble you, Rarity, but I need a quick favor. Could you please fix the button for me? It's my dress for the Grand Galloping Gala.

Rarity: Oh, no, no, no! You can't wear this... old thing. You need a glamorous new outfit for the Gala and I'll make it for you. No problem at all. It will be my pleasure!

Twilight Sparkle: Oh, that's really sweet of you to offer, Rarity, but I can't let you do that. It would be so much work. This dress is fine.

Rarity: Twilight Sparkle. I insist on making you a new dress.

Twilight Sparkle: But...

Rarity: Not another word! I won't take no for an answer.

Twilight Sparkle: Well, in that case... Thank you for your generosity, Rarity. Knowing your handiwork, I'm sure it will be absolutely beautiful.

Rarity: Let me guess, Applejack, y/n. You girls don't want a new gown either.

Applejack: Gown? Shoot. I was just gonna wear my old work duds.

y/n: yeah, I'm not gonna wear anything to the gala.

Rarity: You can't possibly be serious, Applejack and y/n! You girls absolutely must wear formal attire.

Applejack and y/n: Hm... Nah.

Rarity: What if I just spruce up your... duds for you a little bit?

Applejack: Okay, sure. Why not? Since you're up for it and all. Just don't make them too... frou-frou-y.

y/n: or to puffy.

Rarity: Deal!

Rainbow Dash: Look out below!

[crash]

Rainbow Dash: Sorry. New trick. Didn't quite work.

Rarity: Hmm... [gasp] Idea! I'll make you an outfit for the Gala too, Rainbow Dash.

Rainbow Dash: Outfit for the what now?

y/n: for the gala.

Rainbow dash: oh no...

y/n: yep we are screwed.

Rarity: I'll make one for you and you and all of you. Oh! And of course Pinkie and Fluttershy too. Oh, and when I'm done, we can hold our very own fashion show!

y/n: please don't.

Twilight Sparkle: What a great idea! If you're sure you can handle it.

Rarity: Oh, it'll be a little bit of work, but it will be a wonderful boost for my business. Plus, fun!

Rainbow Dash: Oh, I love fun things!

Rarity: Then it's settled. We'll have a fashion show starring us.

Applejack: So all you have to do is make a different, stunning, original, amazing outfit for one, two, three, four, five, six... plus yourself, seven ponies? And lickety split?

Rarity: Oh, Applejack. You make it sound as if it's going to be hard.

timeskip

me and the grils are in raity's shop waiting for the dresses. but we can't see anything cause she says it has to be a suprise.

Rarity: That's it. Keep them closed. Don't look. Okay, you can look now!

Main cast sans Rarity: [gasp]

Rarity: These are your new outfits. What do you think of your old duds now, Applejack? Pretty swanky, are they not? And Twilight! I made this dress for you and I designed each outfit theme to perfectly reflect each pony's unique personality. Oh, it took me forever to get the colors right on this one, Rainbow Dash, but I did it. Oh, and it turned out beautiful, don't you think? And I know you are going to love yours, Fluttershy. It just sings spring! And Pinkie Pie, look! Pink! Your favorite! and y/n, what do you think! its not puffy and it has stars on it!  Aren't they all amazing?[pause]

Twilight Sparkle: Wow... They're...

Rainbow Dash: Yeah, they're...

y/n: I... think... uh...

Applejack: They sure are... somethin'.

Twilight Sparkle: Yes! Something.

Pinkie Pie: I love something! Something is my favorite!

Fluttershy: It's... nice.

Rarity: But what's the matter? Don't you like them?

Twilight Sparkle: They're very nice...

Applejack: And we're plumb grateful 'cause you worked so hard on them.

Rainbow Dash: Mine's just not as cool as I was imagining. She asked.

Twilight Sparkle: I guess what we're all saying is that they're just not what we had in mind.

[collective yeah]

Rarity: That's okay. Not a problem. There's plenty more where that came from. They were only a first pass. You're my friends and I want you to be 110% satisfied. Not to worry, I'll redo them. 

Fluttershy: Oh, Rarity. You don't have to do that. They're fine.

Rarity: I want them to be better than just fine. I want you to think they're absolutely perfect.

Applejack: Are you sure? I mean, we wouldn't wanna impose.

Rarity: Oh, it's no imposition. Really, I insist.

y/n: I like my dress already, you don't have to change.

Rarity: no, no, no, its fine really.

y/n: I'm not gonna stand around and take it. I'm going to wear that dress and you can't stop me!

I say walking out of the building.

timeksip

its been one day since the fashion show. I didn't went to it but as I hear it was bad. so I decided to visted her. I see that the others were there to.

y/n: hey ponies!

pinkie pie: oh! hey y/n!

y/n: what are you girls doing?

applejack: trying to get Rarity out of her house.

Pinkie Pie: Rarity? You okay in there? You haven't come out for days. 

Rarity: I'm never coming out! I can't show my face in Ponyville ever again! I used to be somepony. I used to be respected. I made dresses. Beautiful, beautiful dresses! But now everypony is laughing at me. I'm nothing but a laughing stock! [sobs]

Twilight Sparkle: You're not a laughing stock, Rarity...

Rainbow Dash: She kind of is.

Twilight Sparkle: Shhh! Come on out and talk to us.

Rarity: [sobbing] Leave me alone! I vant to be alone! I want to wallow in... whatever it is that ponies are supposed to wallow in! Do ponies wallow in pity? Oh, listen to me, I don't even know what I'm supposed to wallow in! I'm so pathetic!

Twilight Sparkle: Now what do we do?

Fluttershy: Uh... panic?

Rainbow Dash: That's your answer for everything!

Applejack: Well, we can't just leave Rarity like this.

Pinkie Pie: She'll become a crazy cat lady!

Twilight Sparkle: She only has one cat.

y/n: Give her time.

timeskip

we waited for Rarity to come outside to see the dress we finished. 

Applejack: Thanks to Fluttershy's freaky knowledge of sewing. 

Fluttershy: Do you like it?

Rarity: Like it? Like it?!

Fluttershy: Uh-uh. She doesn't like it.

Rarity: No, I don't like it.

All except Rarity: Awwww...

Rarity: I love it!

All except Rarity: Yay!

Rarity: You ponies did an amazing job. It's exactly the way I imagined it.

Fluttershy: We just followed your brilliant design.

Twilight Sparkle: Like we should have let you do for our outfits. Those first dresses you designed were perfect.

y/n: told ya.

Pinkie Pie: We're so super sorry.

Rainbow Dash: You worked really hard to make our dresses exactly the way we wanted them. We all saw how well that turned out.

Rarity: Oh, I forgive you.

Applejack: Well, that's mighty big of you.

Rarity: But my whole career is still ruined!

y/n: Oh, right. That.

Twilight Sparkle: Maybe not.

Hoity Toity: All right, I haven't got all day.

timeskip

Hoity Toity: Take two.

[music: Twilight's dress]

Hoity Toity: Hello... Oh, this can't be the same designer.

[music: Applejack's dress]

Hoity Toity: Simply magnificent! And I suddenly have a fierce craving for some Dutch apple pie, candied apples on a stick, apple turnovers, apple cobbler...

[music: Pinkie Pie's dress]

Hoity Toity: Briljant!

[thunder]

[music: Rainbow Dash's dress]

Hoity Toity: Oh, spectacular!

[music: y/n's dress]

Hoity Toity: amezing! such beauty!

[music: Fluttershy's dress]

Hoity Toity: Now this is a fashion show! All of these dresses are absolutely amazing. Who is responsible? Step forward, show yourself!

[music: Rarity's dress]

Hoity Toity: Brava! Brava! Magnifico! Encore!

Rarity: Oh, thank you. Thank you! Oh, thank you so much!

the end see you guys and girls in