NextChapter A nice name. Honest, no confusing number loss and/or gain... the only thing it's missing is a space between the words.
oka im back! i saw the good reviews some ppl gave me and i wnated to come back. Also my friend JazzPaw is helping wit the chapters she healped me with the first tow but after that she didnt' have internte but hse got it back now. :DDDDDDDDD

Then StarKit wock up and she was in the forest. But, where? What clan? All of the clans live in the forest. Where is she? Was she born to a rogue couple?

"Mew" she said becuse the sould'nt talk becuse the was a kit. "Mew" is still technically a word.

"Hello kitty" SANRIO?!?! said her mother and StarKit lookd up.

Her mother... was HolyLeaf!" No comment.

"t!" said SatrKit. She lokce around to see whar she was. So now you question where you are?

"Were in the Donderclan camp" Donderclan? That's a new one. Also, how did Hollyleaf know Starkit was thinking this? CAN SHE READ MINDS?! Or was Starkit being a bit too obvious with her body language? I'm leaning towards the latter, but then again, this is a trollfic, and all trollfics have stupid logic. said HolyLeaf "oh look here comes yourfather now!"

Into the nursey came... TigerSar! Hollyleaf and Tigerstar have a huge age gap between them, what do you m e a n?

StarKit new ther was soemthing she should no about TiggerStar but she didnt know wat. *sips tea*

"Thass your daddy TiggerStar!" said HolyLef.

"I no that nam" though StarGit but she could thing about it becuse HolyLeaf said "Their are other kits out there go aly with them I have to takl to TigerSar in peace/ You... literally just birthed this kit. Starkit should be in the nursery for a few moons before she's allowed to play with any of the other kits. Seriously, Hollyleaf is a terrible mother.

StarKit wnet out into the clering and the cats wer stnding over the body of StarStar. They didn't even bury her body yet? Wow. StarKit locked arund to see who els was in the clring. Then she saw RedPaw and lakePool sitting by the side sad'y with ther tals line.d. How do you know the names of these cats if your memory was wiped when you were reborn?

"I thught StarStar tild you to stop bein plebian?" saud StarKit speking her firt sors. And how do you know this information? Also, wasn't her first word "t"?

"How would yoyu no" said LakePawl gettin defend. "Yur just a kit!" Lakepool speaks only the truth.

"Your rigt" said StarKit "how do U no?" Ask a stupid question...

"Your HolylEaf's kid right?" ekd RedPaw. "I think Book and StormFur also had a kit, I think his name is AshKit."

"Yuou should go see him" said JayFethr. *sobs* BUT YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE DEAD!!!!! StarKit new ther was sumthing familr about him to but she could't remembr what!1!1!1

"Yse I will thanz" relld. StarKit and she went bok to the nursry. Didn't Hollyleaf tell you to not be in the nursery while she talked to Tigerstar? She saw AshJit but she dint get to takl to him becuse then ther ewas a yell from abobe the camp. "HAHA LAQWL" yelld a locked up. On on sid she saw YellowFagn BrambleCawl, LeafPolo, Wiit Storm and BlueStra and on the other were HolyLeaf and TigerStar!

"Its a war betwen Starcaln and the Dark Forest!" But technically Hollyleaf and Tigerstar aren't dead due to weird plot holes, so they don't have their spirits in the Dark Forest. said LinoBlaze and then... StarKit realeid... her mom and dad... wee EVUL! NOW you realize this?!