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StarGlam marced ofer too RedPaw and LakePaw she looked angrily. "WhT DID I JUTS SAY?/" she esked. "The elfenth commonment is NO BEING GAY!11 Sadly enough, there are laws against homosexuality in other places. Did that stop some people from being gay? Nope!

"But I love her!1" said LakePol.(a/n. EW!11 THIS IS DIGUSTING) No, it's not disgusting, it's beautiful! Especially considering the little representation the LGBTQ+ community typically gets in media.

"But its agant the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. Actually, I don't think it is. That was the eleventh thing listed, so you added that one for yourself. She wanet over and thurst herslef betwen them. "Do you WANT to go the dark foret?"

"Yes?" ansed RedPaw. I'd go to hell if it meant being with a partner. I'm with Redpaw on this one.

"No you dont" said StarGleam "it'sa relly horribld place." I kno, Ive been their!" I can already see the emo-ness forming in this cat.

Were sory said RedPaw and lakePolw. They locked sadly. "We wont do it agan." DO IT AGAIN! THE WORLD HAS NO MATCH AGAINST YOUR PRIDE!

"I hope not" said StarGlame I'm surprised Redpaw and Lakepool haven't overthrown this corrupt cat yet. turng around and walkin back to FireStar. "We have to show this to the rets off the calns. Please don't.

"ok said FireStar" "we should go to the Gathern." Please don't.

"If we go to the Gathern then I can shoe off the commendments to the other claans1" gagged Gagged? That would mean she's disgusted by this! Yay! StarGlame happ;y. Oh, she was happy. Darn it. "Cmon lets go!" She ran of not wating fro any other cat and then she was at the Gathern! How exactly? We just skipped like three steps.

"ATENSION ALL CATS" she yelled lepping to the HighRock. ?"I NEDD YOU'RE ATTENSION I HAVE AN ANNOUNCER" Incorrect gathering announcement. Also kind of rude-sounding and self-centered.

"Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" Mistyfoot, I know pretty much half the fandom hates you, but please don't fall into this trap. I'm begging you. DON'T DO IT!

"Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commons ot to the other calns and theny all bowed down to her. I would be that one rebel in the crowd who didn't bow. Or multiple, there has to be at least one other person/cat/whatever that has at least half a brain to see the flaws in Stargleam's statements. Thank you for teling use SarkGleam they said happly." "We sont sin again!" Overthrow her already! I need a good excuse to eat this popcorn!

"God" said StarGleam she jumped form the HighRoke. She saw FireStar Wait, if Firestar is here, why wasn't he the one announcing this? Stargleam isn't even the deputy, why is he just allowing this? cumin threw the crowed towed jer. "StarGlame you are a much beter cat then me at this1 you should be letter. Firestar no. Firestar please. Im not deid so ill go join the eldlers insted!" What about Brambleclaw? Shouldn't he be leader then? he said and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. "You have to go to the MonStone today to go get your nien lives. Ill go with you Have fun explaining this to StarClan, Firestar. and so will JayFather." Isn't Jayfeather supposed to be dead?

"Kawaii" Why the random Japanese? I'm fine with the word and all, but in this context, it just sounds... weird. That's the best word I can find for this. said StarGlema happly. They left the Gathern and all the cats were cherring for her, I wouldn't be.

So hod u guys lik eit? it wass so didsuting 2 rite the gya part. As someone who has an easier time writing MLM or WLW couples rather than straight ones, I would've enjoyed writing that. I would've loved it! HBut thigs are guna be better no inteh clams! No they will not! Stargleam made it worse! Also if ur a bad reveiwer u dont belive in Gosh ull go 2 hekc. thx guys for the god reveis. ! *writes on notepad* How many times has she said bad reviewers will go to hell? I've lost count.