Chapter three the Battle 4 the caln
thx jazzie-kun 4 th good review! and stop flmaing the stroy!1 i bet u cant right such a good story!1!1 I... don't even know if I should comment on this.

StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw Ah, so Flamepaw and Lakepaw are Starpaw's sisters not her sitters! Noted. and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) Called it. Jazzpaw is Jazzie-kun. waz slepping on the mos.

"JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and looked at hr.

"Do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. I don't think Starpaw is authorized to start a patrol... oh, who am I kidding, this is a Trollfic. Of course she's authorized to do that!

"Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp.

But then, a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was BlackStar!1!11 *gets the popcorn* Fight! Fight! Fight!

"Shadowclan are attaking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from there dens. She jumped on a cat and clawd him and he ran of. "A cat". Not even a pelt color? A cat this related to whatever plot this fanfic holds deserves at least a pelt color!

"Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Sandstorm? No offense to her (or any Sandstorm enjoyers) but I'm pretty sure you've had stronger cats. Your a good fihter!"

StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. No comment.

thnkx and ples no more flams I'll try, but no promises...